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Re: Leaf_It's customs. [UPDATED: 2.24.18]
I think the error your making is trying to get a personal approval for something that is best designed or at least informed by a group.
You will note I have an extensive set of customs and I've never tried to get one through SoV. Maybe if I found the right mini, but for the most par I like my customs the way they are. I've even created customs of official units so they better fit my collection. If you like your design as it is, stop twea king it and post the card. if you think you have a better design that you like more try again. at some point you need to deside between making your self happy and having a custom that checks all the boxes. or maybe you will get lucky and the same design will do both. Imagine the difference between painting for your self and a commissioned work both require skill but they will look very different. Finally if you really want SoV approval look over the cards for all the existing unis and C3V units. Take a look at Scy tales customs and his reasoning behind them. Scytale also has some good blog posts in the codex, while I give my own advice in my custom thread. The drow assasin can pass but it might not be the one in your vision. |
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Re: Leaf_It's customs. [UPDATED: 2.24.18]
Well met! You are fortunate to have gotten this far with your concept. Assassination After taking a turn with a Drow hero or squad, you may reveal the X order marker on this card, if you do, you may take a turn with this Drow Assassin. If this is acceptable to the SoV, and amenable to you, it should be enough of a Drow connection. If you still want to transpose figures, you may get away with it if you do it after the Assassin's turn. Strategic Shift After taking a turn with this Drow Assassin, you may choose any [friendly][Drow][squad] figure [you control] within 6 sight spaces of that Drow Assassin whose base is no more than 5 levels higher or lower than the base of the chosen figure. You may Switch that Drow Assassin with the chosen figure. Figures moved by Strategic Shift never take any leaving engagement attacks. That way, you can use it to retreat, and shift another unit into engagement with your target. I suggest you not restrict this power to Drow, if you can, making them generally more useful. The Drow are great on Dungeon/Shadow terrain; it's on regular terrain they need help. Hide in Shadows makes your Drow Assassins also dependent on Dungeon/Shadow terrain. I suggest a variation on Estivara's Cloud of Darkness I'm using for both my Viereyl custom and my new Kha custom, as it is not terrain dependent. Cloak of DarknessAfter taking a turn with this Drow Assassin, you may roll the 20-sided die. If you roll a 16 or higher, while it remains on that space, this Drow Assassin has no visible hit zones until you reveal an order marker. I also suggest making their Class Rogue, instead of Assassin, again to make them generally more useful. As a Drow Assassin can now retreat after taking a turn, you might want to eschew any defensive powerin favor of an offensive one. Poison Weapons Each time a Drow Assassin attacks a small, medium or large Hero with a normal attack or a leaving engagement attack and inflicts at least one wound, roll the 20-sided die. If you roll a 1-11, nothing happens. If you roll a 12 or higher, add 1 additional wound to the defending figure. If you could get away with rewriting Estivara's Venom Ray Special Attack, as I did for Viereyl, it would be even more deadly. Envenomed WeaponsEach time Viereyl inflicts a wound, roll the 20-sided die. If you roll 1-9, the defending figure receives no additional wounds from Envenomed Weapons. If you roll 10-19, add one additional wound marker to the defending figure's card, and roll again for Envenomed Weapons. If you roll a 20, destroy the defending figure. I believe that using variations of existing powers to achieve your ends will give you a better chance of acceptance. |
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Re: Leaf_It's customs. [UPDATED: 2.24.18]
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The name Shadow Shift is more thematic to the Drow. I like the option of shifting away after attacking, but I kind of like the way I currently have it better. It allows you to switch a figure and then attack, which was an aspect of the original submission. Hide in Darkness is definitely much better on Dungeon maps, but it still useful outside of them. It has the same chance as Frenzy when it's on any normal terrain. Your Cloak of Darkness is useful against range, but it melee can always attack, even with no hit zone, so I feel like Hide in Darkness is more useful overall. Rogue is an interesting idea, and opens up some synergy with other factions. They won't be as useful outside of the Drow faction, but the Brigand faction could see them as an intriguing addition to their army... I'm not sold on it, but I'll think about this. If I do, I might change the name from Drow Assassin, to Drow Rogue. While I think your ranged version of poison weapons was interesting, I don't think it fits on the Assassin. The Deepwyrm already have poison weapons, and giving a similar ability to the Assassin would feel like I was just making a better Deepwyrm. I don't think the Drow need another melee figure with Poison. My Custom Designs.
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Re: Leaf_It's customs. [UPDATED: 2.24.18]
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I get that you're invested into the Drow Assassin, particularly because you want to help others have more fun with the Drow (a great motivation) and because you bought almost a hundred of them. And I definitely think it has the potential to make a great addition. But don't kill yourself trying to satisfy everyone else and yourself at the same time. That will run yourself and your design ragged. Take a step back if you need to. I find I get my best ideas when I stop trying to cram mechanics into a unit and instead let the unit tell its story through mechanics. Monthly Utah Tournaments in SLC!!
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Re: Leaf_It's customs. [UPDATED: 2.24.18]
I decided to put all of the customs that I am currently working on for the SoV in here.
These are not all of the customs I have, but these are the ones that I have felt the desire to refine to a point where they could be submitted to the SoV. Not all of them are very close to being in an SoV ready state close, and I can promise that some of them will never even be submitted to the workshop. I would like feedback in any form you are willing to give, but keep in mind that I don't want to drastically change any of these designs unless I have to. Still, if you think you have a better idea for the theme or design of one of my customs, I'd love to hear what you have to say. Pricing has been a week point for me in all of my customs, and I'm not terribly good at nailing it down. With that said, I have taken the time to try and get an approximate range in which I think these customs should fall. In you think that my range is off, please let me know. In no particular order, here are the Customs that I would like to eventually submit to the SoV. Ninjas Quote:
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Re: Leaf_It's customs. [UPDATED: 2.24.18]
Could you please include the figures (and pictures of them) you will be using for these? It'll be difficult to give feedback without a visual.
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Re: Leaf_It's customs. [UPDATED: 2.24.18]
Not all of them have figures, due to lack of quantity with the original figures I was intending to use. Give me a bit, and I'll edit photos into the post for the ones that I have figures for.
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Re: Leaf_It's customs. [UPDATED: 2.24.18]
Took me a little longer than I thought it would, but I have added images of all the figures.
(kind of wish I could ping this thread for everyone without double posting...) My Custom Designs.
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Re: Leaf_It's customs. [UPDATED: 2.24.18]
I like this latest batch leaf it. The evil drow sorcerer and cursed blade ninja are some of my favs.
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Re: Leaf_It's customs. [UPDATED: 5.10.18]
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Re: Leaf_It's customs. [UPDATED: 5.10.18]
These are some really interesting customs,
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! Two intrigued me the most, though, so I wanted to share my initial thoughts:
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Normally such a strong cheerleader can be dealt with via a quick assassination, though, but Vierna can't unless the opponent has a good special attack (and doesn't get bogged down by a Drow squad after the first attack). I'd be okay with her strong boosts to the Drow if it weren't for the fact that she's essentially unkillable while Drow remain. I'd probably suggest adding a clause like non-adjacent there somewhere, but to be fair, this is entirely theoryscape. Quote:
Also, I could see slight problems with power levels (nothing gamebreaking, but it could be concerning to the SoV) since he works with any friendly Human and March Onward negates much of the trouble in positioning him. I almost feel like he needs to be 20 points, even though I personally would love some more Isamu competition when drafting. At 10 points, I could see him being an auto-include in many Unique Human builds, although if I understand correctly, he doesn't work with the Ebon Armor. Upon closer reading, I saw that he only works with Heroes and not Squads. This saddens me a little bit, but that's only because I'd love to have some extra help for the Samurai and it'll still be pretty difficult to keep him within range of them without Marching Orders... But I can see why you made the distinction. Proud Member of Platyfly!
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