The Book of Kree Soldier

[SirGalahad]

Something off with alignment of the text on the second bullet.

Is there a reason the first bullet contains "you control" and the second one doesn't?

In terms of capitalization, there is inconsistency even between the various style manuals. Generally, items on a list after a colon are not capitalized; however, independent clauses after a colon usually are. I will take a look back through our colon/capitalization usage and make suggestions as warranted.

In this instance, since the bullet points are simply the possible predicates after "you may" and not independent clauses, they should not be capitalized.

[johnny139]

Also, for what it's worth, I preferred the zoomed-out-but-higher-quality comic art that you initially had, japes - assuming the LD prefers (and since A3n is generally disinterested with comic art as long as it adheres to the basic rules), do you mind switching it back?

[japes]

Originally Posted by johnny139

Also, for what it's worth, I preferred the zoomed-out-but-higher-quality comic art that you initially had, japes - assuming the LD prefers (and since A3n is generally disinterested with comic art as long as it adheres to the basic rules), do you mind switching it back?

Since I need to go back and fix the capitalization anyway no problem. Luckily I duplicated my original placement of the image before I attempted the zooming so I can just turn off the zoomed in image and go back to what I had. Easy fix.

[Yodaking]

I liked the invasion feel of the previous comic art too.

[Karat]

I think this one sells it better

Would it be too much work to change the armor color to match the mini?

[japes]

Originally Posted by Yodaking

I liked the invasion feel of the previous comic art too. Would it be too much work to change the armor color to match the mini though?

Originally Posted by Karat

I think this one sells it better

Would it be too much work to change the armor color to match the mini?

Trust me I tried. I may try again but there are too many instances to individually select the areas and there is too much bleed over in color segments in the yellowish armor with the background that it never looked right. I'll try a few other things probably as I do have other tricks I may not have used yet.

[Yodaking]

FYI, I never asked about changing the armor color so I don't know how that ended up in my post.

[Karat]

Originally Posted by Yodaking

FYI, I never asked about changing the armor color so I don't know how that ended up in my post.

That was me...I meant to edit my post and thought I had but then it wasn't edited..so I re-edited it...I guess that's because I edited it into your post still not used to these mod powers yet

[Soundwarp SG-1]

Originally Posted by japes

Trust me I tried. I may try again but there are too many instances to individually select the areas and there is too much bleed over in color segments in the yellowish armor with the background that it never looked right. I'll try a few other things probably as I do have other tricks I may not have used yet.

I could probably go over the colors manually with my tablet if you want.

[japes]

Originally Posted by Soundwarp SG-1

I could probably go over the colors manually with my tablet if you want.

That would be great. In case you didn't see earlier the armor is actually Dark Blue in the mini.

here

[johnny139]

They're really inconsistent with the coloring for the Privates in the Kree army - I've seen blue and purple and black and brown...

[A3n]

you have indented too far with the dot points. The indent should align with the first letter, after the dot, of the outdent line. (I do prefer the comic as is zoomed in but I defer to those that care more about it)