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Re: The Book of Kree Soldier (Final Editing)
Something off with alignment of the text on the second bullet.
Is there a reason the first bullet contains "you control" and the second one doesn't? In terms of capitalization, there is inconsistency even between the various style manuals. Generally, items on a list after a colon are not capitalized; however, independent clauses after a colon usually are. I will take a look back through our colon/capitalization usage and make suggestions as warranted. In this instance, since the bullet points are simply the possible predicates after "you may" and not independent clauses, they should not be capitalized. |
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Re: The Book of Kree Soldier (Final Editing)
Also, for what it's worth, I preferred the zoomed-out-but-higher-quality comic art that you initially had, japes - assuming the LD prefers (and since A3n is generally disinterested with comic art as long as it adheres to the basic rules), do you mind switching it back?
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Re: The Book of Kree Soldier (Final Editing)
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Would I want it to be everything I love...sure...but that's just not realistic so I'm going to focus on finding things that will make me unhappy and work on fixing those. |
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Re: The Book of Kree Soldier (Final Editing)
I liked the invasion feel of the previous comic art too.
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#137
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Re: The Book of Kree Soldier (Final Editing)
I think this one sells it better
Would it be too much work to change the armor color to match the mini? |
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Re: The Book of Kree Soldier (Final Editing)
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Would I want it to be everything I love...sure...but that's just not realistic so I'm going to focus on finding things that will make me unhappy and work on fixing those. |
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Re: The Book of Kree Soldier (Final Editing)
FYI, I never asked about changing the armor color so I don't know how that ended up in my post.
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Re: The Book of Kree Soldier (Final Editing)
That was me...I meant to edit my post and thought I had but then it wasn't edited..so I re-edited it...I guess that's because I edited it into your post still not used to these mod powers yet
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Re: The Book of Kree Soldier (Final Editing)
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Re: The Book of Kree Soldier (Final Editing)
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here Would I want it to be everything I love...sure...but that's just not realistic so I'm going to focus on finding things that will make me unhappy and work on fixing those. |
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Re: The Book of Kree Soldier (Final Editing)
They're really inconsistent with the coloring for the Privates in the Kree army - I've seen blue and purple and black and brown...
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Re: The Book of Kree Soldier (Final Editing)
you have indented too far with the dot points. The indent should align with the first letter, after the dot, of the outdent line. (I do prefer the comic as is zoomed in but I defer to those that care more about it)
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