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Felindar's Comic Customs Working on Stargate
Here are my cards now Listed by type and as links as per request.
1. Just Because Gorilinator titan Ratsi War Bot Shannon as Batgirl Anthony as Spiderman 2. Justice society of America Star girl / Star Spangled Kid S.T.R.I.P.E. Atom Smasher Stature Star Man 3. AT-43 Red Block Kransny Soldot Trooper Kransny Soldot Grenadier Kransny Soldot RPG Anakonga Trooper Mek Flamer K-Shooter 4. Star Jammers Raza Longknife 5.Dark Angel Max Eyes only Manticorian Troopers Lydecker 6. Presidential Limo cards Jack Ryan 7. Stargate cards Jack Daniel Sam Teal'c Wraith Qween I will update this set as links but post the pic in the post when I anounce them. Pete God makes us strong for a little while so we can defend the weak. DnD Customs Comics Customs Custom Terain TREKSCAPE Last edited by Felindar; June 27th, 2010 at 06:52 PM. |
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Here are the thoughts I have on the Duo.
STAR SPANGLED KID 150 points 4 Life 6 range 7 move 4 attack 3 Defense Flight SINERGEY Cannot be drafted without Stripe. Before you take an action with The Star spangled kid, you may first take an action with Stripe. COSMIC ROD Ssk adds 4 Dice to her defense dice or can add 3 dice to the defense of herself, and all adjacent figures. If she defends all adjacent figures, the shield stays in that format until she acts again. Energy blast. Range 5 3 dice to target and 2 to each adjacent figure. STRIPE 250 6life 4 range 7 move 5 attack 5 Defense Unique Flight Super strength SINERGEY Cannot be drafted without Star-spangled kid. If the SSK is removed from the game or control of her card changes. Stripe gains 1 extra Defense dice and 2 extra attack dice against the figure that affected her. TOUGH When rolling defense dice against any attack, STRIPE always adds one automatic Shield to whatever is rolled. God makes us strong for a little while so we can defend the weak. DnD Customs Comics Customs Custom Terain TREKSCAPE |
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Re: Felindar's Comic Customs
Gorillinator Titan if all you are asking about is the price I not the best of judges there but it feels about right. Do you want other feedback for the card?
SSK & Stripe look good, I don't quite like the wording of "affected her" in Stripe's Sinergy ability, but I can't offer anything better at this stage, & it might be the only way to say it. It just reads a little funny to me. Can't wait to see the finished card. Cheers My Maps: Classic; Marvel My Customs: Dr Who | Terrain | Star Wars Card Template | Repaint & Mods | Playing Card sized Cards Helmaverse | Helmaverse League International C3G Links: C3G Super Hero Draft cards | TableTop Simulator C3G Map additions | Heroscape Dice Roller |
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Yep, I farted around with anumber of diffrent ways of saying it. I wanted to include all of the mind controll and Loyalty swaps ext. I figured that was the cleanest way to say it. Pete God makes us strong for a little while so we can defend the weak. DnD Customs Comics Customs Custom Terain TREKSCAPE |
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Also, on Stripe's Synergy Special, with the current wording, anytime Star-Spangled Kid changes players, Stripe would gain the bonuses, not just when control is taken away from the original player. |
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Thanks I have a problem making my cards sound Scapey. Maby I just have too many game systems floating around in my head. Do you think SSKs Energy blast is too powerfull at 3 dice to all adjacent? I don't know if I want a Squad killer. With Stripe's Synergy with the curent wording would He loose the bonuses if controll goes back to the origional player? That was my intent. Maby Synergy Star-Spangled Kid and Stripe must be drafted together. If Star-Spangled Kid is Destroyed or control of her card changes, Stripe gains 1 extra Defense die and 2 extra attack dice against the figure that caused Star-Spangled Kid to be destroyed or to change players, untill controll of the card changes back to the origional player. P.S. How do you do the cross out of text? I see the Qwotes and such but no cross out. Do you add the starting and ending symbols yourself? Pete God makes us strong for a little while so we can defend the weak. DnD Customs Comics Customs Custom Terain TREKSCAPE |
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On strikethrough, it's the symbol in your editor. |
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Really nice looking cards Felindar, and a few cool ideas there.
If you're open to feedback, you may want to look at: - Need Height and Size for both characters - SYNERGY could be retitled as it does not read exactly the same on both cards. Possibilities would be "S.T.R.I.P.E SYNERGY" and "STAR SPANGLED KID SYNERGY" or "FATHER DAUGHTER SYNERGY" and "PARENT SYNERGY". The point is, since the power reads differently on each card, the title of the powers should be different as well. - COSMIC ROD is nice but may be a bit confusing as written. At what point does she decide whether she is defending herself or all those adjacent to her? Also, it may be hard to track who is affected and for how long. Although I hate using markers, maybe they are needed when she is covering others. Or it could be simplified by making it always +3 to defense for her and her friends (cut out the choice of +4). I think her cost would need to go up unless the defense field only lasts until she reveals her first Order Marker, at which time there is no defense bonus for anyone for the rest of the round. Was that your intent? - I love the use of the same pic for both cards. I'm no GIMP or Photoshop guy but is there a way to highlight the proper one on each card? Maybe dull the vibrance of the other while creating some glow around the primary character? Just a thought from a non artsy guy like me. Well I hope some of those ideas made sense. Keep up the great work. |
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I was thinking SSK would pick her defence status whenever you reveil an order marker. However as I stated above she is intended to be played by a 5 year old, a Wonderfly smart and savy 5 year old but maby I should keep it simple. Pete God makes us strong for a little while so we can defend the weak. DnD Customs Comics Customs Custom Terain TREKSCAPE |
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By the way if you are looking for something cool to do for the kids you can try this.
I Photo shoped in picktures of the kids onto the cards. It was only a tad harder than with a mini picture. I just need to spruce them up now that I have the corect fonts and such. God makes us strong for a little while so we can defend the weak. DnD Customs Comics Customs Custom Terain TREKSCAPE |
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Great idea Felindar. I bet the kids get a kick out of playing with their own cards. + rep
Cheers My Maps: Classic; Marvel My Customs: Dr Who | Terrain | Star Wars Card Template | Repaint & Mods | Playing Card sized Cards Helmaverse | Helmaverse League International C3G Links: C3G Super Hero Draft cards | TableTop Simulator C3G Map additions | Heroscape Dice Roller |
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Pete God makes us strong for a little while so we can defend the weak. DnD Customs Comics Customs Custom Terain TREKSCAPE |
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