The Book of Bailey Hoskins

[Lazy Orang]

Unfortunate is on Trapster, but I've never been in favour of repeating mistakes for the sake of consistency, and it isn't really a personality... I'm in favour of Hapless here.

[Scapemage]

The yellow accent, I’d maybe try using the more orangish yellow you get in the comic for the accent and see if it blends better. We tend to go with the mini colors but those yellows are close enough I’d say the orangish yellow may look better with such a dark blue.

No problem with the accent being used on the target zone border. Aesthetically it’s not appealing to me, I think because for me it reads like a mistake and draws the attention there rather than the art, but if you and the LD are happy that’s what matters IMO.

I agree with both of these points together. I believe I understand the intent of the hitbox panel to draw your eye around the card from the hitbox through the spot of color in Bailey on the comic art up to the normal panels, and it works well, but I believe the comic suit color that's more orange would look nicer if that is your intent.

Font size needs increased as yoda suggested. At least 7.0 or 7.2 since it’s the only power should be good.

I usually leave it at the standard size for consistency, but if it's the norm to enlarge I will start doing that.

Are we sure on Unfortunate as a personality? Does that define one’s personality? Just sounds odd.

I'm okay with either personality. I'm in favor both of following precedent and correcting for the future.

[Ronin]

I suggested the Unfortunate re-use, I think - I get that it's questionable as a personality, but I kinda liked the idea of having it as a potential tag for the right power.

I'd definitely be fine with Hapless as well.

[japes]

Originally Posted by Scapemage

I agree with both of these points together. I believe I understand the intent of the hitbox panel to draw your eye around the card from the hitbox through the spot of color in Bailey on the comic art up to the normal panels, and it works well, but I believe the comic suit color that's more orange would look nicer if that is your intent.

I usually leave it at the standard size for consistency, but if it's the norm to enlarge I will start doing that.

I'm okay with either personality. I'm in favor both of following precedent and correcting for the future.

Refresh my memory, what is the templates standard font size? It may be that my eyes are going but I try to make it as large as possible up to I think 9.

Arkham covered all of my comments.

[L0B5T3R]

Doesn’t seem to be much objection to Hapless so I think I’d prefer that. Hapless plus a font increase and then I’ll call for release.

[Soundwarp SG-1]

Alrighty, second pass at the cards has been uploaded. I’m not a mod, so someone else will have to edit the links in the first post.

I’ll get a paint guide up in a day or two, I’ve got to double check which paint colors I used first.

[Scapemage]

Looking good!

[Tornado]

Love the figure art. I usually go for the comic art but I am digging that.

[L0B5T3R]

Do we need to have the painting tutorial posted before release?

[Scapemage]

Yes, I think so.

[L0B5T3R]

Originally Posted by Soundwarp SG-1

Alrighty, second pass at the cards has been uploaded. I’m not a mod, so someone else will have to edit the links in the first post.

I’ll get a paint guide up in a day or two, I’ve got to double check which paint colors I used first.

Any progress here Soundy?

[Soundwarp SG-1]

I’ll have the paint guide up in around 30 mins or so. Took me awhile to find the red I used for the hair.