The Book of John Dusk

[tcglkn]

Looks good to me

[Soundwarp SG-1]

Prototype cards up. Playing around with replicating the blue tendril things, let me know if you don't dig it.

[Lord Pyre]

Oh I definitely dig it!!

[Lord Pyre]

I forgot to update the cost here. Sorry about that.

[johnny139]

Wording pass. Big thing is markers - the color is always lower-case, the Thing Markers are always capitalized. Also, I think it's "3 or less" in the last power, instead of 3 or fewer? But I'm not an expert in conventional grammar.

AURA BARRIER 4
Start the game with 4 blue Aura Markers on this card. Before John Dusk or any friendly figure within 3 clear sight spaces of John Dusk rolls defense dice, you may remove one Aura Marker from this card. If you do, the defending figure rolls 1 additional die, or 3 additional dice if that figure is a Lawman.

AURA ASSAULT SPECIAL ATTACK
Range 3. Attack 3.
John Dusk may only use this special attack if there is at least one Aura Marker on this card. After attacking, you may move the defending figure one space. Figures moved by this special attack never take leaving engagement attacks. When John Dusk attacks with this special attack, he may attack 2 additional times. He cannot attack the same figure more than once.

CROSSING THE RUBICON
Once per game instead of attacking, you may choose an adjacent figure with 3 or less Life remaining and roll 3 unblockable attack dice against the chosen figure. If the chosen figure is destroyed, remove all Order Markers from cards in your army and for the rest of the game John Dusk's class is considered to be Vagabond instead of what is listed on this card.

Also not really sure if Vagabond is the best class for him to transition into - shouldn't it be Outlaw or something? - but I'll defer to the person that's actually read the story.

[Lord Pyre]

Updated.

He goes on the run, becomes a wanted criminal, and holes up in a slum neighborhood in abandoned buildings. Outlaw would be fine, I just wanted something with no synergy so it's an actual penalty rather than something you can build around.

[Soundwarp SG-1]

So are we changing the class here?

[Lord Pyre]

Originally Posted by Soundwarp SG-1

So are we changing the class here?

Unless someone has a better suggestion. I’m happy as is.

[IAmBatman]

Sounds good.

[Lazy Orang]

Fugitive?

[Lord Pyre]

I’m set on Vagabond unless there’s a big push for it to not work for one reason or another.

In the sequel he’s kind of the hero of a slum, and not really a fugitive anymore since they leave him alone for the most part. So I felt vagabond felt pretty good to be all encompassing.

[Soundwarp SG-1]

Did some updates here