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The Lithograph of all HSers Minds *Poems of all HSers*
I dont know where this should go, so I'm putting it here.
Yesterday I wrote this poem. Let me know what you think. (PS- I'm 13) My mind is clouded by a mental storm Remorse tugs at me like tight shackles My heart is being compressed by my thoughts until it is no more This existence is futile, and I must cry to the world, for love, it is not so simple It is filled with twists and turns unable to be deciphered by man. Yet man traverses on into the abyss, unknowing of consequences or experiences yet to be discovered. My mind is this wasteland, and I am the realm’s only slave. I will accept any and all feedback. Also, I might share other poems Ive written. Edit- Just a side note, I AM NOT depressed, even if my poetry is dark. They each convey a secret, hidden message. I doubt anyone could figure most of them out. Last edited by Creationist; October 14th, 2008 at 08:48 PM. Reason: Notice |
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