The Book of Negative Man

[Soundwarp SG-1]

If it helps I can switch to my alt mode first before doing the card, that's kinda like a different person.

[MrNobody]

This passes to Final Editing on time.

I'll get the second book set up soon.

[MrNobody]

Book of Negative Spirit is now live.
@Karat @johnny139 can I get a wording check in both threads whenever convenient?

[Karat]

Heroscape language wise, it looks good. You could probably shorten some of the phrases to this card instead of Army Card, but we have precedent for both so I'll leave that up to you. The Negative spirit gets the same feedback. The one thing I thought I caught was covered on the spirit. I can go through it a little latter with our capitalization guide to see 8f anything sticks out.

[Karat]

Some capitalization issues.

NEGATIVE SPIRIT HOST
Before taking a turn with Negative Man, you may do either or both of the following;
If the Negative Spirit is on this card, remove all wound markers from its card and place it adjacent to Negative Man.
Move and Aattack with the Negative Spirit.

For pasteability:

NEGATIVE SPIRIT HOST
Before taking a turn with Negative Man, you may do either or both of the following;
If the Negative Spirit is on this card, remove all wound markers from its card and place it adjacent to Negative Man.
Move and attack with the Negative Spirit.

[johnny139]

Wound Markers should also be capitalized.

[MrNobody]

Thanks, pardners!

[johnny139]

Oh, and also you have a semicolon in the first power that should be a regular colon. I assume that one's just a typo though!

[Soundwarp SG-1]

First run at cards up.

[Arkham]

I'd increase the size of the mini, as Negative Man looks really small there, and try putting a slight gaussian blur on the mini background just to put better focus on the mini. Are there any comic options that don't have a plain white background?

[MrNobody]

I love how Robotman, Elasti-Girl, and Negative Man all have the crimson-ish red on their cards. Seems like it’ll really make them pop as a set. Thanks SW!

[MrNobody]

I propose we move Negative Man to ON DECK.
@Arkham - YEA

@japes

@johnny139 - YEA

@Karat

@Lazy Orang

@quozl - YEA

@Soundwarp SG-1 - YEA