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[Heroscaper 101]

This figure has enough availability for the SoV, I think. I am thinking of adding a knight to Jandar. His cost is 135 points and he has 3 special powers. Here is the card & the miniature, if you have any feedback for this guy.
The figure used for this unit is Zhentarim Fighter from Auggies Wizards of the Coast D&D Set. The name and model number is Zhentarim Fighter Archfiends #40.

[superfrog]

That miniature gives me major "female D&D Cleric" vibes, not "male Earth Knight" vibes.

Not sure where you're getting Diamond Armor from. She looks to be wearing standard chain mail armor.

[Heroscaper 101]

Originally Posted by superfrog

That miniature gives me major "female D&D Cleric" vibes, not "male Earth Knight" vibes.

Not sure where you're getting Diamond Armor from. She looks to be wearing standard chain mail armor.

I got inspiration from Screwattack Top 10 Knights on youtube.

[superfrog]

Originally Posted by Heroscaper 101

I got inspiration from Screwattack Top 10 Knights on youtube.

Okay, but powers should match their mechanics and the miniature. It doesn't make sense to give a figure a power called "Diamond Armor" if they don't have any diamond armor.

Did you change the miniature? In this type of thread, make sure you note what changes you've made, so people can follow along.

(The new miniature doesn't have diamond armor either).

[Heroscaper 101]

The figure used for this unit is Zhentarim Fighter from Auggies Wizards of the Coast D&D Set. The name and model number is Zhentarim Fighter Archfiends #40.

[Heroscaper 101]

The figure used for this unit is Spellstiched Hobgoblin Zombie from the Wizards of the Coast D&D Set. The name and model number is Spellstiched Hobgoblin Zombie Deathknell #043.

[superfrog]

So if a zombie kills an opposing figure, who comes back? A zombie or Stitches?

[Heroscaper 101]

Originally Posted by superfrog

So if a zombie kills an opposing figure, who comes back? A zombie or Stitches?

That is a good question, depends on what want to bring back. Should I make it so that Stitches comes back if any Undead Savage kills a small or medium hero figure? I do wonder this wasn't brought up with the Zombie Hulk, yeah I know he is Uncommon but is still a hero?

[superfrog]

For the Zombie Hulk, it only works when you kill a large or huge figure. So it's mutually exclusive of killing a small or medium figure.

[Heroscaper 101]

The figure used for this unit is The Sensei from Auggies Heroclix Set. The name and model number is The Sensei Brave and the Bold #026.

[superfrog]

Good job getting the picture on the card! A few thoughts on the design, though:

One Shield Defense (at least in my mind) should only go to figures with a shield.

I'd drop that power entirely, bump his defense up a tick or two, give him Vanish instead of Defy Death, and drop the points down to at most 140.

Also I'm not sure where the "move through water" part comes in thematically.

[Heroscaper 101]

Originally Posted by superfrog

Good job getting the picture on the card! A few thoughts on the design, though:

One Shield Defense (at least in my mind) should only go to figures with a shield.

I'd drop that power entirely, bump his defense up a tick or two, give him Vanish instead of Defy Death, and drop the points down to at most 140.

Also I'm not sure where the "move through water" part comes in thematically.

Any thoughts about the Honor among Ninjas power which I tested. You are right about One Shield Defense going to figures with shields. He is a master of all things ninjutsu, what do you think I should give a Vanish or something else.