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Re: Freelance Feedback Focus Group (3FG) - New Thread!
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The figure used for this unit is League Assassin from Auggies Heroclix Set. The name and model number is League Assassin Brave and the Bold #004. The figure used for this unit is League Elite from Auggies Heroclix Set. The name and model number is League Elite Brave and the Bold #011. The figure used for this unit is The Sensei from Auggies Heroclix Set. The name and model number is The Sensei Brave and the Bold #026. |
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Re: Freelance Feedback Focus Group (3FG) - New Thread!
@Heroscaper 101
You didn't have to change the entire card just because someone pointed out flaws in the design. You can definately scale a card back, but you took the ninjas in a whole new direction. Why not look for the direction you want to take with these units before you continue posting them. For example, I might take the squad in a whole different direction other than human ninjas, but another person might turn the figure into a master ninja who takes turns with other ninjas. And another user might go in a whole different direction. My customs. NE Ohio Tourney - TBA SW Ohio Tourney - NHSD 550 points AotV - Colliding the minis of AotP with the world of HS. |
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Re: Freelance Feedback Focus Group (3FG) - New Thread!
Good advice from flameslayer.
I'll post some thoughts on the dragon tomorrow. |
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Re: Freelance Feedback Focus Group (3FG) - New Thread!
I think I like Sephir for the most part. A few points:
Those are all minor points, I think she looks really cool! ----------------------------------------- I think flameslayer has given some good advice about your customs in general and the Blood Mist Ninjas specifically. When you change a card really drastically and frequently, it looks like you don't have a strong idea of what YOU want the card to be. Most critiques can be addressed with small changes. |
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I’ll give 170 a few tries! Thanks! I like where her stats are at now, and yeah 4 defense on a kiting dragon would be a nuissance for the opponent. I’ll think of a better name. Maybe Furious Fires, or even Wounded Firebreath to pay homage to Krug. Thanks superfrog! My customs. NE Ohio Tourney - TBA SW Ohio Tourney - NHSD 550 points AotV - Colliding the minis of AotP with the world of HS. |
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Re: Freelance Feedback Focus Group (3FG) - New Thread!
I hope everyone will love this version of the Blood Mist Ninjas enough. Their first power Smoke Cloud is like a vanish, unlike Disappearing Ninja that activates from normal attacks, the Blood Mist Ninjas vanish works on any attacks. They have Phantom Walk and Counter Strike powers like Kantono Daishi has. Here are the miniature and the army card.
The figure used for this unit is League Assassin from Auggies Heroclix Set. The name and model number is League Assassin Brave and the Bold #004. The figure used for this unit is League Elite from Auggies Heroclix Set. The name and model number is League Elite Brave and the Bold #011. The figure used for this unit is The Sensei from Auggies Heroclix Set. The name and model number is The Sensei Brave and the Bold #026. |
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Re: Freelance Feedback Focus Group (3FG) - New Thread!
I'll quote my post from a few posts up:
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Re: Freelance Feedback Focus Group (3FG) - New Thread!
Can you explain why you made the changes you made?
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Re: Freelance Feedback Focus Group (3FG) - New Thread!
I gave them a vanish power instead, guess d20 rolls are beyond a ninja capabilities. The second power gave room for a third power. You can see that I added Counter Strike to them like Kantono Daishi has, also the Blood Mist Ninjas are the first ninja squad to have that ability. Their class is Shinobi, to indicate that this ninja squad is more experienced.
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You sort of explained Counter Strike. But both cards have a d20 power, so I'm confused as to your explanation there. Why did you drop Sacred Dagger? To me that was one of the focal points of the design. Again, I'm not saying you should change it back at all. It just feels a bit like you're throwing things at the wall and seeing what sticks. That is fine to do, of course, especially in your own thread. But if you're coming in here, you should have a section of the wall you're aiming at, so people can help you hit it. |
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