The Book of Shriek

[Lord Pyre]

Yea

[Ronin]

This passes on time Or it will in two hours. I'm visiting family and got mixed up on time zones.

Think we're good on wording, but open to any suggestions.

Not sure who's on art here, since Ark hasn't been around.

[Soundwarp SG-1]

I can do the art here if need be.

[Ronin]

Sounds groovy.

This for real passes to final editing

[Soundwarp SG-1]

Got a first run of cards up.

[Ronin]

Looks great! Updated the art credit in the OP, so I think we're set here. Let's send Shriek On Deck.

Arkham - abstain @japes @johnny139 @Karat @Lord Pyre @Soundwarp SG-1

[Soundwarp SG-1]

yea

[johnny139]

...wait a minute, is the pale bluish part of her costume her skin? And the top part just like a weird choker type thing? Very implausible.

This is sort of a weird critique, but I feel like the mini art background is kind of clean looking for Shriek. I feel like I usually see her in like, rundown abandoned places, with stuff strewn everywhere. Might be wrong though.

In general though cards, wording, all that looks good. Yea

[Lord Pyre]

Originally Posted by johnny139

...wait a minute, is the pale bluish part of her costume her skin? And the top part just like a weird choker type thing? Very implausible.

Gotta show as much cleavage as possible!

Yea

[japes]

Originally Posted by johnny139

...wait a minute, is the pale bluish part of her costume her skin? And the top part just like a weird choker type thing? Very implausible.

This is sort of a weird critique, but I feel like the mini art background is kind of clean looking for Shriek. I feel like I usually see her in like, rundown abandoned places, with stuff strewn everywhere. Might be wrong though.

In general though cards, wording, all that looks good. Yea

I always thought it was all costume.

Soundwarp, do you think you could ad a touch of transparency to the energy blast from her hands?

[Ronin]

Originally Posted by johnny139

...wait a minute, is the pale bluish part of her costume her skin? And the top part just like a weird choker type thing? Very implausible.

Yeah, her costume has a pretty open front.

I'm pretty sure she's already wearing it in her first appearance in the asylum, it's just under her straitjacket. At least, I don't remember a scene where she goes home to change after Carnage busts her out of the asylum.

Unclear whether the staff just let her keep her costume, or if that's just how they dress patients. Might just be that after dealing with Carnage, they're too afraid to try to take anyone's weird jammies away.

This is sort of a weird critique, but I feel like the mini art background is kind of clean looking for Shriek. I feel like I usually see her in like, rundown abandoned places, with stuff strewn everywhere. Might be wrong though.

Hmm. Didn't occur to me at first, but I feel you. A slightly grungier background might hit the spot.

[Soundwarp SG-1]

I’ll look for something later today.