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Old November 26th, 2010, 11:47 PM
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Re: The Goodbye.

Excellent.

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Old November 26th, 2010, 11:59 PM
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Re: The Goodbye.

This is great! Really helps wrap things up in the world. I would like to know a little more about the history behind the device, etc., but it's a minor criticism. Well done!

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Old November 27th, 2010, 12:02 AM
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Re: The Goodbye.

I hate to ask you this,but you said the four allied generals. What do you mean? There is five. Sorry didn't want to say anything bad about such a good story. Very nice wording. Maybe I should read more of your other stuff.

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Good read, PK.
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Old November 27th, 2010, 01:53 AM
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Old November 27th, 2010, 02:16 AM
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Re: The Goodbye.

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I hate to ask you this,but you said the four allied generals. What do you mean? There is five.
I meant to imply "allied against Utgar." I don't count Aquilla because she didn't get that much development before the end.
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Old November 27th, 2010, 02:37 AM
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Old November 27th, 2010, 04:35 AM
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Re: The Goodbye.

Nice vignette. Well done!

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Re: The Goodbye.

Great story..........just great

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Re: The Goodbye.

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I hate to ask you this,but you said the four allied generals. What do you mean? There is five.
I meant to imply "allied against Utgar." I don't count Aquilla because she didn't get that much development before the end.
Ah ok. That makes sense. Great work. Great words.

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Old November 27th, 2010, 10:22 AM
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Re: The Goodbye.

My wife almost cried. Good job.

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Re: The Goodbye.

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