The Book of Red Lantern (Atrocitus) (II)

[Arkham]

I propose a vote to move to On Deck.

@Lord Pyre
@johnny139
@japes
@Soundwarp SG-1
@Yodaking

[Lord Pyre]

Looks great!

Yea

[Yodaking]

Another one I was not following pre-return. Pretty soon I'll be in on every vote again.

[Spidey'tilIDie]

Originally Posted by Yodaking

Another one I was not following pre-return. Pretty soon I'll be in on every vote again.

Can that be counted as an Abstain then? Otherwise, this will sit for the time limit. Personally, I'm hoping to have him done by Sunday.

[johnny139]

Yea

Time limits aren't super important nowadays since you can open a new thread when you propose for On Deck, but I would personally count any post with clear intent as an Abstain.

[Yodaking]

I shouldn't have been tagged at all since this thread started more than a month before my return, so no need to wait on me. You only need the 3 or 4 hero votes of those who were active heroes when the thread started and are still active heroes now.

[japes]

yea

[Soundwarp SG-1]

Sorry to cause a delay, but something I just noticed here:

Why does Ravager Motivator say 'any other Ravager' in the first bit but nothing like that in the second bit?

Like it kinda makes it seem like he's supposed to be able to pick himself as one of the Ravagers getting turns from the battery removal version, but that doesn't seem to be the intent or how he was played.

Just seems a bit confusing to me.


Other than that minor bit though, yea

[johnny139]

That's as good point - I do think it could use some clarification. And looking it over, could probably be used to streamline things a bit, too... but this might also just be an exercise in me being overtired and playing with words.

RAVAGER MOTIVATOR
After revealing an Order Marker on this card and taking a turn with Red Lantern, if an enemy figure received one or more wounds this turn, you may choose another Ravager Hero you control. If an opponent's Unique or Event Hero was destroyed, you may instead remove a red Battery Marker from this card and choose 2 other Ravager Heroes. Take an immediate turn with any chosen Heroes. The chosen Heroes must be within clear sight of Red Lantern.

Or maybe this?

RAVAGER MOTIVATOR
After revealing an Order Marker on this card and taking a turn with Red Lantern, if an enemy figure received one or more wounds this turn, you may choose up to 2 other Ravager Heroes you control within clear sight of Red Lantern. Take an immediate turn with one of the chosen Heroes. If an opponent's Unique or Event Hero was destroyed, you may then remove a red Battery Marker from this card and take a turn with the other Hero.

Or just tack another "other" onto the one we have, which does work fine.

RAVAGER MOTIVATOR
After revealing an Order Marker on this card and taking a turn with Red Lantern, if an enemy figure received one or more wounds during this turn, you may take an immediate turn with any other Ravager Hero you control within clear sight of Red Lantern. If an opponent's Unique or Event Hero was destroyed, you may instead remove a red Battery Marker from this card to take an immediate turn with up to 2 other Ravager Heroes you control within clear sight of Red Lantern.

[Karat]

Why not just lose the first other. It already can't be Atroc due to needing to be in clear sight. While we are at it, may as well drop a little fluff and add some clarity. Thus:

RAVAGER MOTIVATOR
After revealing an Order Marker on this card and taking a turn with Red Lantern, if an enemy figure received one or more wounds during this turn, you may take an immediate turn with any other Ravager Hero you control within clear sight of Red Lantern. If an opponent's Unique or Event Hero was destroyed this turn, you may instead remove a red Battery Marker from this card to take an immediate turn with up to 2 Ravager Heroes you control within clear sight of Red Lantern.

For pasteability:

RAVAGER MOTIVATOR
After revealing an Order Marker on this card and taking a turn with Red Lantern, if an enemy figure received one or more wounds this turn, you may take an immediate turn with any Ravager Hero you control within clear sight of Red Lantern. If an opponent's Unique or Event Hero was destroyed this turn, you may instead remove a red Battery Marker from this card to take an immediate turn with up to 2 Ravager Heroes you control within clear sight of Red Lantern.

[Arkham]

Updated. This passes. #932

[tcglkn]

So I just need to update the RL card that's released with the other mini right? I'm gonna go ahead and do that now.