The Book of Beta Ray Bill

[japes]

Originally Posted by Hellfire

I wouldn't make it too complicated but using a foreshortening effect to add in some additional lightning that connects to the lightning in the background and wraps around the front of the hammer would look pretty slick.

How does this grab you?

An issue I am having is that the mini pose makes it tough to get a visual of the hammer and hide his feet so he looks like he's flying. I tried rotating the mini and using other non-pony riding shots but it ended up looking ridiculously off balance.

And thanks @A3n ...I can't look at any shots of this and not see him riding a pony now.

[A3n]

You're welcome.

[SirGalahad]

Originally Posted by Aggressive Sock

Gotcha. See, I figured someone would chime in with the right answer, rather than just an answer. Lol :P

Tell me which one you want to go with.

Also the 'still' was removed as superfluous (sorry, my daughter is gearing up for the SAT), but if there is a consensus that its inclusion will avoid confusion, I am not opposed.

[Arkham]

It's between these two, just to be clear:

Originally Posted by Just_a_Bill

After Beta Ray Bill attacks an adjacent figure with this special attack, he may then attack a different adjacent figure, adding 1 attack die. He may continue attacking different adjacent figures, adding another attack die for each subsequent attack, up to a maximum of +2 dice.

Or possibly this?

After Beta Ray Bill attacks an adjacent figure with this special attack, he may then attack a different adjacent figure, adding 1 to his attack. He may continue attacking different adjacent figures, adding another 1 for each subsequent attack, up to a maximum of +2 dice.

Personally, either works, but I'd go with the first. Whichever, this is all Japes needs before we can get this design squared away.

Speaking of, great job on the mini pic change Japes.

[marrowick]

Originally Posted by Aggressive Sock

It's between these two, just to be clear:

Personally, either works, but I'd go with the first. Whichever, this is all Japes needs before we can get this design squared away.

Speaking of, great job on the mini pic change Japes.

Yup I favor the first.

[TrollBrute]

If that's the one you like, update the SP with that and let japes know he can update the card. I think it would also be a good idea to add the "still" back in to Back-to-Back.

[marrowick]

Originally Posted by TrollBrute

If that's the one you like, update the SP with that and let japes know he can update the card. I think it would also be a good idea to add the "still" back in to Back-to-Back.

Probably, That does still clarify. Updated, @japes you can update the cards now.

[Karat]

I don't like this wording. It feels too...customy to me.

[TrollBrute]

Originally Posted by Karat

I don't like this wording. It feels too...customy to me.

Do have a suggestion for something less customy but still as clear? The only new terminology would be "another", but that really helps to make the power clearer and SirG seems fine with it.

[Karat]

After Beta Ray Bill attacks an adjacent figure with this special attack, he may attack a different adjacent figure. He may continue attacking different adjacent figures in this manner until there are no eligible targets remaining. Add 1 die to each additional attack for each attack made with this special attack this turn, up to a maximum of +2 dice.

This follows more closely with how we worded Lightning Re-Strike SA on Weather Wizard.

[TrollBrute]

I think JaB's suggestion is much, much clearer.

[Karat]

I don't.