The Book of Star Sapphire (Diana Prince)

[Soundwarp SG-1]

'Deal a wound to the attacking figure' should be like 'the attacking figure receives one wound' or there-abouts. You don't deal wounds in Heroscape, you inflict or receive them.

Other than that, seems ok, so yea

[IAmBatman]

[Arch-vile]

SP updated, thanks SW.

[Arch-vile]

Will need a wording update at some point (it would make sense to hold off on updating until closer to release in case Karat/Johnny also have wording updates), but this passes.

#1038

[johnny139]

The "dealing wounds" thing was the only part that stood out to me - otherwise wording looks good to my eyes. Late Yea; one of the first Heroclix I ever bought, so I'm super glad she's finally done! I think Indigo Lantern Atom is the only one left from that set?

[Arch-vile]

Indigo Atom is the last of the deputy lanterns left, yep. We've really hit the lantern corps hard lately!

[Sporx]

ERB Power Review:

Passionate Fury: Maybe we could break up the phrasing in the second sentence? Either, "The attacking figure receives one wound, and then place..." or "The attacking figure receives one wound. Then, place that figure..."

Also, in the final sentence, replace "receive any leaving..." with "take any leaving..." It looks like we use "take" in other powers affecting leaving engagement attacks, see e.g. Blue Lantern (Barry) and GotU (Ganthet).

[Arch-vile]

Made those updates, both make sense to me. Since it's not a mechanics change, I won't ask for a card update, but the SP is updated in case we need to update the card at a later point (or for the poker cards).