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Old June 26th, 2019, 04:36 PM
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Re: The Book of Soundwave - Public PTing
Awesome, I won't bother with the recap then if you two have already given the pre-yea. Me, T, & Ronin all tested him so that should be an easy 3 additional votes needed to pass.

I Propose Soundwave for Final Editing.

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Re: The Book of Soundwave - Vote Final Editing
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Re: The Book of Soundwave - Vote Final Editing
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Re: The Book of Soundwave - Vote Final Editing
Thanks Lazy! I think that's your first vote that I've collected.
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Re: The Book of Soundwave
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OPERATION: DISRUPTION
Once per game, immediately after initiative is rolled, you may reveal an "X" Order Marker on this card. If you do, for the rest of the round an opponent's Common or Unique figure that is within 7 spaces of Soundwave can only be activated when an Order Marker is revealed on its card, cannot use any special power on its card to activate another figure, and may not make Leaving Engagement Attacks.

RELAY ORDERS
At the beginning of your turn, if Soundwave is within 7 spaces of a Conqueror or Strategist Hero with Superstrength you control, you may move an unrevealed Order Marker from that Hero's card to this card or the card of any Hero you control within 7 spaces of Soundwave. After revealing an Order Marker on this card, instead of moving with Soundwave, you may take a turn with a figure you control with the Cassette Storage Special Power.

EJECT!
After revealing an Order Marker on this card, instead of attacking with Soundwave, you may remove one friendly figure that is not destroyed from this card and place it on any unoccupied space within 2 clear sight spaces of Soundwave. Take an immediate turn with that figure.
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OPERATION: DISRUPTION
-"leaving engagement attacks" doesn't need to be capitalized"
-I'm cool with the wording here, but I contributed to it pretty heavily so I'd be curious to get other thoughts

RELAY ORDERS
-I've been trying to provide notes rather than just straight-up redline stuff, to invite more discussion and 'show my work' a little better, but there are a few tweaks I'd make here, so....
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At the beginning of your turn, if Soundwave is within 7 spaces of a Conqueror or Strategist Hero you control that has the Super Strength special power, you may move an unrevealed Order Marker from that Hero's card to this card or the card of any Hero you control within 7 spaces of Soundwave. After revealing an Order Marker on this card and before taking a turn with Soundwave, you may take a turn with a figure you control with the Cassette Storage special power. If you do, Soundwave may not move during his turn.
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At the beginning of your turn, if Soundwave is within 7 spaces of a Conqueror or Strategist Hero you control that has the Super Strength special power, you may move an unrevealed Order Marker from that Hero's card to this card or the card of any Hero you control within 7 spaces of Soundwave. After revealing an Order Marker on this card and before taking a turn with Soundwave, you may take a turn with a figure you control with the Cassette Storage special power. If you do, Soundwave may not move during his turn.
-I've looked through this text several times and I'm 95% certain I never refer to him as "Soundwarp" in the power
-the red changes are style points/capitalization stuff, and the blue are tweaks to avoid unnecessary turn-nesting
-I think it would really help the concerns T and I had with the learning curve if the bonding part was broken out into its own power. It's mechanically distinct from the rest of the power and doesn't slot in neatly.

EJECT!
-I'd again do the turn-nesting fix and just make the power happen after Soundwave's turn, if he didn't attack
-And I'd also consider Soundwave's point on limiting it to figures with the Cassette Storage special power. I don't think it would cause issues now, but it might be a weird interaction down the line
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Old June 26th, 2019, 09:17 PM
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Re: The Book of Soundwave - Vote Final Editing
OPERATION: DISRUPTION is a little vague. Are you supposed to choose one figure within 7 spaces or does it apply to all figures within 7 spaces?
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Re: The Book of Soundwave - Vote Final Editing
All figures are effected. Maybe drop the 'an' before opponents, pluralize figures, and change 'is' to 'are' and it will read more clearly?

I'm cool with the Eject! call out if others are concerned about it, and the wording change on the bonding is cool with me too. As far as spinning the bonding out into a 4th power, not sure everything would fit once you do that. I'll update your Relay Orders text, and attempt to make the other fixes, just double check me and make sure I don't reference Soundwarp either.
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Re: The Book of Soundwave - Vote Final Editing
This is what I changed the SP too. Only a few small tweaks to Operation, while Eject was pretty heavily rewritten.


OPERATION: DISRUPTION
Once per game, immediately after initiative is rolled, you may reveal an "X" Order Marker on this card. If you do, for the rest of the round, opponent's Common and Unique figures that are within 7 spaces of Soundwave can only be activated when an Order Marker is revealed on its card, cannot use any special power on its card to activate another figure, and may not make leaving engagement attacks.

EJECT!
After revealing an Order Marker on this card, after taking a turn with Soundwave, if you did not attack with Soundwave, you may choose one friendly figure with the Eject special power on this card. Place the chosen figure on any unoccupied space within 2 clear sight spaces of Soundwave and take an immediate turn with that figure.
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Re: The Book of Soundwave - Vote Final Editing
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This is what I changed the SP too. Only a few small tweaks to Operation, while Eject was pretty heavily rewritten.


OPERATION: DISRUPTION
Once per game, immediately after initiative is rolled, you may reveal an "X" Order Marker on this card. If you do, for the rest of the round, opponent's Common and Unique figures that are within 7 spaces of Soundwave can only be activated when an Order Marker is revealed on their card, cannot use any special power on their cards to activate another figure, and may not make leaving engagement attacks.

EJECT!
After revealing an Order Marker on this card, after taking a turn with Soundwave, if you did not attack with Soundwave, you may choose one friendly figure with the Eject special power on this card. Place the chosen figure on any unoccupied space within 2 clear sight spaces of Soundwave and take an immediate turn with that figure.
You'd want to change the tenses in a few places, right?
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Re: The Book of Soundwave - Vote Final Editing
Yeah, that's why I need someone looking over my shoulder on these things. Thanks Nobody! Updated.
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-I've looked through this text several times and I'm 95% certain I never refer to him as "Soundwarp" in the power


-And I'd also consider Soundwave's point on limiting it to figures with the Cassette Storage special power. I don't think it would cause issues now, but it might be a weird interaction down the line
You're starting to go the opposite way there though

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Re: The Book of Soundwave - Vote Final Editing
Btw, this passes to Final Editing, so you can update the thread title.
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