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Re: The Book of Darkholder (Vote for On-Deck)
I missed that. Good catch. Updated.
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#86
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Re: The Book of Darkholder (Vote for On-Deck)
I probably should have kept a closer eye on these guys, since I think their strongest build right now is probably just to have one of them in like a Robot build or something as a cheap way to cast spells.
But I don't really think that would be broken or anything, so I'm not going to hold up the design over it. yea My Repaints and Mods: Updated 1-13 My Custom Cards: Updated 4-15 My Custom Superheroes: Updated 1-13 My figure images for online games: Alliance figures, Utgar figures My Etsy Store |
#87
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Re: The Book of Darkholder (Vote for On-Deck)
Yea
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#88
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Re: The Book of Darkholder (Vote for On-Deck)
yea
Would I want it to be everything I love...sure...but that's just not realistic so I'm going to focus on finding things that will make me unhappy and work on fixing those. |
#90
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Re: The Book of Darkholder
Thanks for wrapping this one for me tickle!
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#91
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Re: The Book of Darkholder
The repitition of worshippers in the first sentence of the bio reads as poor style to me - I'd change one of 'em.
Are we ever going to get Varnae or Chthon? Not an EPB query, just wondered! Otherwise clear. |
#92
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I do plan on both at some point. I'll look into the first sentence.
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#93
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Not sure how else you would word that or make stylistically any different
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#94
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Pick one of the uses of worshippers, find a synonym and replace it. Using a word like that twice in quick succession, particularly in the same sentence, feels repetitive to read... situations like this are half of what synonyms are for, frankly!
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#95
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Re: The Book of Darkholder
Fixed.
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#96
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Re: The Book of Darkholder
Does acolytes need capitalisation?
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