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C3G Legacy Library This is the archive for all the designs released in the original era of C3G. Feel free to post any figure specific questions in their individual books. |
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Re: The Book of Super Buu (vote final editing)
Yea
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Re: The Book of Super Buu (vote final editing)
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Re: The Book of Super Buu (vote final editing)
This passes
I think wording looks good, but I always appreciate a double check there. |
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Re: The Book of Super Buu (vote final editing)
I added the "s" at the end of "figure" in the first power cause it seemed to read weird, let me know if I'm wrong.
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Just in case there is confusion on whether or not the targeted figure takes LEAs or if it's just Buu that doesn't. |
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Re: The Book of Super Buu (vote final editing)
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Thanks for doing checks, Jek! |
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Re: The Book of Super Buu (breathing)
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Also not sure why you need the crossed out phrase in Absorption. How else is he destroying figures? (And also who else would they be in clear sight of?) Resilience looks good to me as is and confirms that you don't need the "of him" in absorption. Or you need it in both places |
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Re: The Book of Super Buu (vote final editing)
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#46
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Re: The Book of Super Buu (final editing)
Thanks fellas! Updated the SP with Tickle's wording suggestions for the first two powers.
I based the wording of Majin Resilience on Clayface 2's Claymation, so I left the first part as-is but changed the second part as suggested by Jekyll. |
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Re: The Book of Super Buu (final editing)
Nice, I'll get started!
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#48
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Re: The Book of Super Buu (final editing)
Cards are up!
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