The Book of M.R.D. Trooper - Page 20

japes · #**229** May 31st, 2019, 08:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by quozl

The Neutralizer glyph works on any Hero.

It's based entirely on the neutralized glyph. Thematically the MRD reconstructed the neutralized (and other forge/beast) tech to create their weapons.

Karat · #**230** May 31st, 2019, 08:52 PM

So no unique signifier then.

IAmBatman · #**231** May 31st, 2019, 09:18 PM

Lazy Orang · #**232** June 1st, 2019, 10:11 AM

Again, we have some issues with the bio here:
1) Billionaire shouldn't be capitalised;
2) 'Dr. Bolivar Trask and Dr. Sybil Zane served as the scientists for the organization when it came to developing the Sentinels' isn't reading quite right to me, but I can't say it's actually incorrect... I'd suggest changing it to 'Dr. Bolivar Trask and Dr. Sybil Zane served as the organization's scientists tasked with developing the Sentinels,' though, for the sake of clarity.
3) 'The M.R.D has as nickname "the Mardies"'... is grammatically screwed up, to be honest. I'd suggest changing it to 'The M.R.D is often nicknamed "the Mardies".'
Otherwise we're cleared.

japes · #**233** June 1st, 2019, 10:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lazy Orang

Again, we have some issues with the bio here:
1) Billionaire shouldn't be capitalised;
2) 'Dr. Bolivar Trask and Dr. Sybil Zane served as the scientists for the organization when it came to developing the Sentinels' isn't reading quite right to me, but I can't say it's actually incorrect... I'd suggest changing it to 'Dr. Bolivar Trask and Dr. Sybil Zane served as the organization's scientists tasked with developing the Sentinels,' though, for the sake of clarity.
3) 'The M.R.D has as nickname "the Mardies"'... is grammatically screwed up, to be honest. I'd suggest changing it to 'The M.R.D is often nicknamed "the Mardies".'
Otherwise we're cleared.

That works for me. Feel free to change that. I think I fixed your permissions.

Lazy Orang · #**234** June 1st, 2019, 10:41 AM

Done. Thanks, chap!

Ronin · #**235** June 5th, 2019, 09:08 PM

Looks like the comic card that got moved out here was a prototype version that doesn't have the same coloring as the mini card (or a hit zone). Believe @Scapemage won't be around tonight, not sure who else is around and has the ability to move the right card.

@japes @Soundwarp SG-1 @A3n @tcglkn @Arkham

(The Mutant release is tonight! Weird. Really snuck up on me.)

Ronin · #**236** June 5th, 2019, 09:13 PM

Oh, and I'm satisfied with the 'works the same as the Neutralizer' point on the ability to affect Event Heroes here, though I forgot to actually say that.