Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread

[Dysole]

Copy cyberclaw wording since the Sturla glyph is a thing. I'd also say "theirs" instead of "their figure" sounds more grammatically correct.

~Dysole, with finishing touches

[Confred]

Originally Posted by Dysole

I'd also say "theirs" instead of "their figure" sounds more grammatically correct.

I'm not sure what you're referring to, please write out the power

[Confred]

For reference (Commentary to come)

Originally Posted by Dysole

Copy cyberclaw wording since the Sturla glyph is a thing.

CYBERCLAW
Figures affected by the Cyberclaw cannot be moved by any special power on an Army Card or Glyph.

Glyph of Sturla (Revive)
One at a time, roll the 20-sided die for each figure destroyed in the battle (yours, your teammates and your opponents'). If you roll a 19 or 20, place the figure in any starting zone of your choice. If you roll 1 through 18, the figure remains destroyed.

PEACEMAKER GUN
Powers cannot remove figures from this card.

[Dysole]

CURSE OF THE EARP HEIR
When placing order markers, if any opponent controls a figure on the battlefield who follows Utgar or Valkrill, you must place a numbered order marker on this card and each opponent must place a numbered order marker on the card of a figure of theirs who follows Utgar or Valkrill, if possible.

That sounds most grammatically correct to me although I modded it from my original suggestion.


"Powers" is vague. Since Gladiatrons specifically calls out Special Powers on Army Cards or Glyphs that tells me that is the Heroscape language to use.

~Dysole, noting that Heroscape language could absolutely have been written better in many places

[Confred]

Originally Posted by Dysole

CURSE OF THE EARP HEIR
When placing order markers, if any opponent controls a figure on the battlefield who follows Utgar or Valkrill, you must place a numbered order marker on this card and each opponent must place a numbered order marker on the card of a figure of theirs who follows Utgar or Valkrill, if possible.

"of theirs" feels way wrong without source.

How about:

CURSE OF THE EARP HEIR
When placing order markers, if any opponent controls a figure who follows Utgar or Valkrill, you must place a numbered order marker on this card and each opponent must place a numbered order marker on the card of a figure they control who follows Utgar or Valkrill, if possible.

[Dysole]

I love that version. I'll be back later to comment on the Cyberclaw stuff.

~Dysole, about to play a game in soon

[Confred]

Originally Posted by Confred

CYBERCLAW
Figures affected by the Cyberclaw cannot be moved by any special power on an Army Card or Glyph.

Figures on this card cannot be moved by any special power on an Army Card or Glyph.

"Powers" is vague.

PEACEMAKER GUN
Special powers cannot remove figures from this card.

Since Gladiatrons specifically calls out Special Powers on Army Cards or Glyphs that tells me that is the Heroscape language to use.

It mentions Army Cards and Glyphs, if we start listing do we need to mention terrain also?

[Confred]

Originally Posted by Dysole

Copy cyberclaw wording since the Sturla glyph is a thing. I'd also say "theirs" instead of "their figure" sounds more grammatically correct.

~Dysole, with finishing touches

I'm agreeing with this sentiment. Even if we create a seemingly better version, since an official version has been published it will by default be the actual best version.

PEACEMAKER GUN V6.22
When attacking a Demon or Undead figure, if Wynonna Earp rolls 2 or more skulls, the defending figure cannot roll defense dice and if destroyed is placed on this card. Destroyed figures on this card cannot be moved by any special power on any Army Card or Glyph.