The Book of Vance Astro

[IAmBatman]

yea

[Lord Pyre]

Yea

[Karat]

Yea

Suggested Edits.

COOPERATIVE ATTACK PLAN
Before any figure you control attacks, if the defending figure has been attacked by another figure you control this player turn, you may reveal an "X" Order Marker on this card. If you do, the defending figure subtracts a shield from whatever is rolled when defending against that attack.

PSYCHOKINESIS SHIELD BLAST SPECIAL ATTACK
Range 5. Special Attack 4.
After a figure that is not huge rolls defense dice against this special attack, you may place it on an empty space up to X spaces away from its current placement, ignoring any leaving engagement attacks. Where X is the number of shields you rolled for this attack. After attacking with this special attack, if Vance Astro is unengaged, he may attack 1 additional time. He and cannot attack the same figure more than once.

For pasteability.

COOPERATIVE ATTACK PLAN
Before a figure you control attacks, if the defending figure has been attacked by another figure you control this player turn, you may reveal an "X" Order Marker on this card. If you do, the defending figure subtracts a shield from whatever is rolled when defending against that attack.

PSYCHOKINESIS SHIELD BLAST SPECIAL ATTACK
Range 5. Special Attack 4.
After a figure that is not huge rolls defense dice against this special attack, you may place it on an empty space up to X spaces away from its current placement, ignoring any leaving engagement attacks. Where X is the number of shields you rolled for this attack. After attacking with this special attack, if Vance Astro is unengaged, he may attack 1 additional time and cannot attack the same figure more than once.

[Ericth74]

updated SP with @Karat 's edits

[Dr. Jekyll]

Yea

[MrNobody]

Where X is the number of shields you rolled for this attack.

Do we usually do this bit as its own sentence? Reads odd to me.

Yea

[IAmBatman]

By odd you mean it’s a sentence fragment (dependent clause and all). Should be part of a longer sentence, yeah. Good catch.

[Dr. Jekyll]

Does this read better?

PSYCHOKINESIS SHIELD BLAST SPECIAL ATTACK
Range 5. Special Attack 4.
After a figure that is not huge rolls defense dice against this special attack, you may place it on an empty space up to X spaces away from its current placement, ignoring any leaving engagement attacks. Wwhere X is the number of shields you rolled for this attack. Figures moved by this special attack will not take any leaving engagement attacks. After attacking with this special attack, if Vance Astro is unengaged, he may attack 1 additional time and cannot attack the same figure more than once.

PSYCHOKINESIS SHIELD BLAST SPECIAL ATTACK
Range 5. Attack 4.
After a figure that is not huge rolls defense dice against this special attack, you may place it on an empty space up to X spaces away from its current placement, where X is the number of shields you rolled for this attack. Figures moved by this special attack will not take any leaving engagement attacks. After attacking with this special attack, if Vance Astro is unengaged, he may attack 1 additional time and cannot attack the same figure more than once.

[tcglkn]

You still want the comma there.

[IAmBatman]

I might make "Ignore any leaving engagement attacks" a separate sentence at that point.

Agreed on leaving the comma where Tickle mentioned it.

[Dr. Jekyll]

I just edited the post, should read better now.

[Ericth74]

SP updated with improved wording on SA