The Book of Hawkman (Justice League)

[Arch-vile]

yea

[Soundwarp SG-1]

meh yea

[IAmBatman]

Oh the excitement. It overwhelms.

He passes. @Ronin and @Karat as always, I'm appreciative of anything you have here for wording comments.

[Karat]

Edits.

HAWK-EYED HUNTER
When Hawkman attacks a non-adjacent figure with his normal attack, that figure does not add to its defensethe defending figure does not receive any additional defense dice for height advantage or terrain effects. After attacking this waynormally, Hawkman may move up to 2 spaces and attack the same figure one additional time.

NTH METAL WEAPONRY
When Hawkman attacks an adjacent figure with a normal attack, add 2 to his Attack number. After Hawkman inflicts one or more wounds on an Undead figure or a figure with the Magical Defense special power with his normal attack, that figure receives one additional wound.

CHAMPION’S CHARGE
Once per round, after revealing an Order Marker on this card and taking a turn with Hawkman, if he is engaged, you may may either move up to 2 other Champions you control up to 2 spaces each, or choose another Champion you control to make an adjacent normal attack an adjacent figure with a normal attackwith.

For pasteability:

HAWK-EYED HUNTER
When Hawkman attacks a non-adjacent figure with his normal attack, the defending figure does not receive any additional defense dice for height advantage or terrain effects. After attacking normally, Hawkman may move up to 2 spaces and attack the same figure one additional time.

NTH METAL WEAPONRY
When Hawkman attacks an adjacent figure with a normal attack, add 2 to his Attack number. After Hawkman inflicts one or more wounds on an Undead or a figure with the Magical Defense special power with his normal attack, that figure receives one additional wound.

CHAMPION’S CHARGE
Once per round, after revealing an Order Marker on this card and taking a turn with Hawkman, if he is engaged, you may may either move up to 2 other Champions you control up to 2 spaces each, or choose another Champion you control to make an adjacent normal attack with.

[IAmBatman]

Hawk-Eyed Hunter is only supposed to get the double attack if the first attack is ranged. Other changes look good.

Second power follows existing Nth Metal verbiage, so I'm going to stick with "figure" in there, but I understand the attempt to abbreviate.

Champion's Charge changes work.

[IAmBatman]

SP updated.

[Karat]

I'd go with this then.

HAWK-EYED HUNTER
When Hawkman attacks a non-adjacent figure with his normal attack, the defending figure does not receive any additional defense dice for height advantage or terrain effects. After making a non-adjacent normal attack, Hawkman may move up to 2 spaces and attack the same figure one additional time.

[IAmBatman]

SP should be good unless Ronin has anything to add.

[Ronin]

CHAMPION’S CHARGE
Once per round, after revealing an Order Marker on this card and taking a turn with Hawkman, if he is engaged, you may may either move up to 2 other Champions you control up to 2 spaces each, or attack normally with another engaged Champion you control.

That sounds better to me than what's in the SP. Other powers look fine.

Technically mildly different, but only if a figure has something that lets it attack non-adjacent figures while engaged, or if you were mainly looking to SW special yourself.

[IAmBatman]

Yeah, no SW specials here, please. Good change. I'll update the SP now.

[IAmBatman]

@Arkham I believe everything should be good for carding as you're able.

[Soundwarp SG-1]

That change would mean the Champion couldn't attack Gundams and such.