Re: The Book of Ms. Marvel (Kamala) - VOTE for Release
That mini is rough
Anyway, actual vote
Yea
Random wording thoughts:
Should the stretchy fun times power have an 'only' in the last sentence? Like so:
"Each option may only be chosen once per round."
IDK, sounds a smidge more clear to me, but I'm not a language guy and it would be pretty silly for someone to read the current one as like.. just letting you know choosing a different one each round is an option or something.
Embiggen refers to 'her' without first saying who 'her' is, that seems weird. Feels like it would be better like:
"For the remainder of the round, add 2 to Ms. Marvel's Defense number, each turn you may choose all options for her Morphogenic Mayhem special power and her size and height become large 10."
EDIT: On the yellow thing, would it make more sense to have the lightning bolt looking shape above the life value be the splash of yellow?
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