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Re: Drewman-chu's new and improved? Hellfire Club White Que
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Re: Drewman-chu's new and improved? Hellfire Club White Que
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Feedback: We could all use a little more |
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Re: Drewman-chu's new and improved? Hellfire Club White Que
Simple fix is to trigger the Sedation off of a normal attack.
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Re: Drewman-chu's new and improved? Hellfire Club White Que
Thanks for the help Confred. I thought of that but the power could really happen after either attack. I think I have a nice compromise that is still very thematic. I boosted her points up to 160. If anyone would like to play test her I would appreciate any input.
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Re: Drewman-chu's new and improved? Hellfire Club White Que
TELEPATHIC SEDATION
Each time Emma Frost inflicts a wound on a Unique Hero, you may roll the 20-sided die. ... "Each time" is Deepwyrm Drow language "you may" is for thematic reasons, as is, if somehow she wounds herself, she has to roll against herself. Variation: PSYCHIC DEFENSE Any time a figure without the Mental Shield special power attacks Emma Frost or a friendly figure within 3 spaces of Emma Frost and rolls at least one skull, you may remove the Order Marker X from this card to immediately end the turn. Damage is never dealt and the figures receive no wounds. Having "X" at the end of "PSYCHIC DEFENSE" seems unneeded because how would it modulate, PSYCHIC DEFENSE 1 - Remove Order Marker 1? I'm not sure if the range should care about the defending figure and not the attacking, but it sure is easier to word this way. I originally thought that Removing the Order Marker X is good enough to not have to say once per round. But then, what if there were a trickster figure that added Order Marker X's? She would unthematically increase in power. So perhaps she should have both statements. But then why even need the marker? Once per round should suffice. Then again, the power could evolve from this dialogue - She could use the power by removing any order marker. She could sacrifice turns to protect. .. I used "Any time" instead of "Each time" to not confuse people into thinking that somehow she can use the power even without having proper OM's. The last part of the power is the cloudy part. I vaguely remember that "If you do," language is unofficial to Heroscape and better suited for Magic: The Gathering. Also. You remove the marker to do something, to end the turn in this case. HS doesn't like to leave such things hanging. Ie no: "trigger, remove marker.period.", yes: "trigger, remove marker to do something." Then since we're not using "If you do," simply clarify in sentence form. "Damage is never dealt and the figures receive no wounds." .. [Reference: area effect powers] / Last edited by Confred; December 21st, 2010 at 03:28 AM. |
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Re: Drewman-chu's new and improved? Hellfire Club White Que
Thanks I will change the language of Psychic Sedation. I took "Psychic Defense" directly from the cg3 Prof X card. I thought they worked out all the language kinks?
Last edited by Drewman-chu; December 22nd, 2010 at 12:47 AM. |
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Re: Drewman-chu's new and improved? Hellfire Club White Que
Professor X was a behind-the-scenes promo custom and I didn't have a hand in editing him. He would have been cleaner, I believe.
C3G is great for ideas and power levels, but not always so with elegance. In addition to C3G, I would check out Matt Helm's customs. |
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Re: Drewman-chu's new and improved? Hellfire Club White Que
Thanks for the info Confred. I will use your wording for both powers and will defer to you when any wording issues come up. I appreciate all your help.
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Re: Drewman-chu's new and improved? Hellfire Club White Que
White Queen updated
Last edited by Drewman-chu; December 30th, 2010 at 11:09 AM. |
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Re: Drewman-chu's new and improved? Hellfire Club White Que
Next up is Donald Pierce
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Re: Drewman-chu's new and improved? Hellfire Club Donald Pi
Next is Mastermind.
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Re: Drewman-chu's new and improved? Hellfire Club Mastermin
I'm a bit confused by Master of Illusions. Do you take a turn with the figure you temporarily control. Does control of the character return after taking that turn? If that's what you're trying to do, you will probably need to word it almost exactly like Mind Exchange.
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