Swamper's Customs - The Avenger Initiative!

[Swamper]

*ahem*

Well, I thought that I would put a few of my superhero customs I have come up with over the last month or so up for all to view, and criticize, and help me make better! So without further ado, my favorite custom I've made so far. *NOTE: My father won't allow me to download the card creator thing, so I have no fancy cards to put up here. Just the stats and powers* But luckily, mac122 is a stellar guy and is making the cards for me!

Spider-Man Characters

Spoiler Alert!

You may notice two new symbols on my Spider-Man Card. The one on the left stands for Swing line 4, and the one on the right stands for Spidey Sense 11. Enjoy!






and the Gang Members NM24 Approved!










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Avengers!

Spoiler Alert!

Nick Fury
Life 5
Move 5
Range 6
Attack 4
Defense 4

Master Spy - At anytime during the round, you may reveal the X order marker on this card and rearrange your remaining Order Markers.

Director of SHIELD - After revealing an OM on Fury, you may move up to two Spies or Agents you control up to 5 spaces each.

160

Black Widow
Life 4
Move 6
Range 6
Attack 4
Defense 4

Close Combat Expert - Whenever Black Widow attacks an adjacent figure, add 1 to her attack value.

Interrogation - At the beginning of each round, if Black Widow is adjacent to an enemy figure, roll the 20d. If you roll a 13 or higher, reveal one of your opponents OM's at random.

Stealth Dodge

140

Hawkeye
Life 4
Move 5
Range 8
Attack 4
Defense 4

Designated Arrow SA - Range 6 Attack Special - Instead of attacking normally with Hawkeye, you may use Designated Arrow Special Attack. Choose one of the following.
Attack 4 - All figures adjacent to the targeted figure are affected. Figures roll defense dice seperately
Attack 4 - Hawkeye can attack up to three different figures with this attack. You can not target the same figure more than once.
Attack 6
Attack 2 - The defending figure may not roll any defense dice against this attack.

180

Captain America
Life 6
Move 6
Range 1
Attack 6
Defense 6

Vibranium Shield - Whenever Captain America defends against an attack from a nonadjacent figure, add one automatic shield to whatever is rolled.

Avengers Assemble! - Instead of taking a turn with Captain America, you may take a turn with any Avenger you control.

Shield Throw Special Attack - Range 6, Attack 4 - Choose up to two figures to be affected by this attack. Figures roll defense dice separately.

240

Thor
Life 8
Move 7
Range 1
Attack 8
Defense 8

God of Thunder SA - Range 5, Attack 6 - Figures roll one less defense die against this attack.

God Speed - When attacking normally, Thor may attack twice. You cannot target the same figure more than once.

Flying

400

Ironman
Life 6
Move 7
Range 7
Attack 4
Defense 6

Double Attack

Suit Repairs - If Ironman did not attack this turn and is unengaged, roll the d20. If you roll a 12 or higher, remove a wound marker from this card.

Flying

270

Hulk
Life 8
Move 6
Range 1
Attack 7
Defense 8

Hulk Smash - For each wound marker on this card, add one to Hulks attack.

The Other Guy - Whenever a OM is revealed on this card, roll the d20. If you roll a 17 or higher, choose an opponent to take control of Hulk for the remainder of the turn. Hulk must attack a figure during this turn. At the end of the turn, control of Hulk returns to the original controller.

Super Leap SA - Move 6 Attack 6 - Instead of moving normally, you may use Super Leap SA. Choose an empty space adjacent to a figure up to 6 spaces away. Place Hulk on that space and attack. Choose another empty space adjacent to a figure up to six spaces away, place Hulk on that space, and attack again. Hulk does not take leaving engagement strikes.

420

Loki
8 Life
6 Move
6 Range
7 Attack
7 Defense

Loki's Rod - Start the game with three green markers on this card. After moving and instead of attacking, you may choose an adjacent figure and roll the 20d. If you roll a 7 or higher, place a green marker on that card, and remove all OM's from that card. Whenever an OM is revealed on Loki's card, you may instead take a turn with any figure that has a green marker on their card. Whenever a figure that has a green marker is wounded by an adjacent attack, remove the green marker from that card and place it back on this card.

Interdimensional Portal
If you win initiative, you may place any number of figures you control on empty spaces within 3 spaces of Loki. Loki may use this special power only once per game.

Deceptive Decoy
If Loki is attacked and at least one skull is rolled by the attacking figure, you may roll the 20-sided die. If you roll a 14 or higher, Loki takes no damage an you may immediately place him on any empty space within 4 spaces of the attacking figure.

475

[Balantai]

Here are a few quick comments, Swamper.

Cost is too low. He's stronger than Cap America for sure. I'd put him at about 260 to start.

Your Web Blade Special Attack needs some sort of descriptive text. Special attacks always do something "special".

Overall, he seems pretty fun.

[Swamper]

260?! I don't want him over 200.

I'll lower his defense to 4, and make the web blade attack 3 instead of four. As for a special power for web blade, I'll need to think about something fitting.

-Swamper, cost cuttingly.

[Swamper]

New draft of Carnage. Changes in bold.

Life 6
Move 6
Range 1
Attack 7
Defense 4

Symbiotic Regeneration - (same)
Web Blades - range 5 attack 4 (I want to put something in here about this move being unaffected by Spidey sense. Maybe that could be the wording. Web Blade special attack is unaffected by Spidey sense?)
Swing line 4
Spidey sense 14

200 points? In my playtests I just did against Venom and Spidey he won both, but not by much.

[mac122]

WEB BLADES SPECIAL ATTACK
Range 5. Attack 4.
The defending figure may not use Spidey Sense when attacked by Web Blades Special Attack.

Something like this?

[Swamper]

Yes, like that. I'm not sure if that would be good official wording though. I would like for it to affect other figures other than the Spidey dudes. Maybe something like "this attack can not be avoided"?

[Balantai]

Defending figures may use any special powers on their card when defending against Web Blades Special Attack.

This might work for what you're trying to accomplish.

[Balantai]

Originally Posted by Swamper

200 points? In my playtests I just did against Venom and Spidey he won both, but not by much.

Try pitting him against Capt and Iron Man and see who wins.

[mac122]

WEB BLADES SPECIAL ATTACK
Range 5. Attack 4.
Figures attacked with Web Blades Special Attack may not move for the duration of Carnage's turn and must roll defense dice normally.

I think this is closer to what you want, but I'm not sure about the wording.

I'm not too familiar with Carnage. Does this attack launch "blades" at the defender? And because he is also a "Spider" man, he has learned how to avoid triggering Spidey Sense with this attack?

Edit: Ninja'd by Balantai. His wording is much better.

WEB BLADES SPECIAL ATTACK
Range 5. Attack 4.
Defending figures may not use any special powers on their army card when defending against Web Blades Special Attack.

2nd Edit:
Say hello to your little friend (version 1):

Spoiler Alert!

I assumed you'd want the Superstrength Symbol. The hit zone is made from the best looking mini photo I could find on the web. Do you want the "tentacles" to be part of the hit zone or greyed out?

[Swamper]

Wow, thanks mac122! That looks great! The tentacles are fine colored red. They are a part of him, after all.

Out of three battles with Iron Man, Carnage won 2 and lost one. And out of three battles with Cap, he won 1 and lost 2. I think that 210 would be good pointswise. And now, I need to test him in some armies!

[hi1hi1hi1hi1]

Not bad. And I'm glad to see you trying your hand at some customs. It becomes easier to catch errors the more you make... trust me.

[Scapemage]

Some things to say here:

For the special, it has to say "can't use Spidey Sense or SPider Sense" since Venom and Spidey's powers are named differently. Also, why do you want him at 200? If he can take down Venom and SPidey at once, she should be 310 (Venon: 150 + Spidey: 160).

Otherwise, great job! I can probably do cards for you since school if out tomorrow.