A New Marr... BOOK 2 Pg.26

[Metaknight]

A New Marr... BOOK 2 starts on Page 26!
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Chapter 1

Past the stars, through the worm holes, over into a new realm, new dimension, we find Marr. A newer planet compared to many. Inhabited by many different creatures but only three diserve any recognition. The Vipers of the seas. The Primadons of the jungles. And the Marro of everything else.

These Marro were believed to be the first on this planet, thus their name Marro comes from the planet. They are hive creatures. They spawn from Hives and then grow. They are trained to be warriors, weapons of dominance. They can suck a planet dry, and can't feel mercy. There are over a billion Marro on the relatively small planet Marr, and now they are also somewhere else.

They live as soldiers on the world called Valhalla. It has been quite a few years since the Battle of All Time began. The good guys are winning. It's 5 on 1. Utgar grows more worried and angry the more he loses. It's only a matter of time before he's helpless.

The Marro are summoned to Valhalla by that ruthless leader. Utgar. He has drawn many Marro but ever since they build a hive, they don't need Utgar anymore. They are plotting against him. Once they're done with this world it will be nothing more than their homeworld. Either desert, dense jungle, or ocean.

A Marro Drone stumbles upon something amazing, something extraordinary. He looks a little closer as he hovers over a pool of water. It was more of a large puddle however. He doesn't know what water really is, as he doesn't need it and the fact that he's not very bright.

"Whaa?" he says in a crackly voice. He bends over a little more and falls into it, "Aah!" and then he hits with a splash, yet it is not deep. "What did you find?" says a Marro Drudge. He looks over and sees the Drone in the water. "Get up," the Drudge says. The drone doesn't move just looks around. He makes a grunitng noise. "Get up!" the Drudge repeats. The drone gets up and jumps out of the water, however he trips on a root in this dense jungle as he gets out and tumbles to the ground. The Marro Drone becomes dizzy as he gets up. "Move!" says the frusturated Drudge and then he points one of his guns to the Drones back. "huh," says the Drone as he spins his spear around his back, slicing off the Drudges arm. And then the Drone turns around and jabs the Drudge with his spear and sticks him to a tree. Purplish, reddish blood dripples from the Drudges back. "Hu, hu, hua!" he yells as the Drone yanks the spear from the Drudges body. He falls dead to the ground.

The Drone walks away. He's feeling more powerful. He feels like he can actually talk well, like his voice had changed. He feels as if he is much more cordnated. Then he feels a need to go back to the puddle pool, and drink some more water. So he does and his strength increases. He feels a lot better than he did before. He could actually think, and use reason. "Magic water," he said as he began his walk back to his camp. He was right, wellsprings were magical.


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