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MegaSilver's Customs -- Critical Role DnD minis!
Check out the new listing of Customs here! https://www.heroscapers.com/communit...18#post2471118
--------- What happens to those Swogs when their Riders get killed? For those not captured again, they go Feral into Aquilla's forests. Though if captured again they still retain their training. The mini for this figure is Smilodon (Sabertooth Tiger) - Kingmaker #30 Pathfinder Battles. NAME = FERAL SWOG GENERAL = AQUILLA SPECIES = SWOG UNIQUENESS = UNCOMMON HERO CLASS = PREDATOR PERSONALITY = WILD SIZE/HEIGHT = LARGE 6 BASE SIZE = NORMAL DOUBLE LIFE = 3 MOVE = 8 RANGE = 1 ATTACK = 3 DEFENSE = 3 POINTS = 50 DISENGAGE Feral Swog is never attacked when leaving an engagement. BEAST TRAINING Feral Swog has the class of Beast instead of what is listed on this card while there is at least one friendly Orc. SWIFT STRIKE SPECIAL ATTACK Range 1. Attack 3. If this Feral Swog started this turn unengaged, the defending figure rolls 1 fewer defense die.
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Last edited by MegaSilver; August 10th, 2021 at 03:24 PM. |
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Re: War Horse of Troy -- MegaSilver's Customs
I love the idea itself, but the card has a few errors. Firstly, targeted is spelled with one t, not two. Secondly, it should read, when the War Horse is targeted. The about is unnecessary. Also, it should read roll a combat die, and the figure does not receive a wound, it receives one wound. I think. Not sure on the last one.
On the other hand, this is a great first draft. + rep! |
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Re: War Horse of Troy -- MegaSilver's Customs
Well, as I clicked the link I was really excited, ready to see a Trojan Horse custom!
But this is neat too, a very original mechanic. A slow moving ranged figure (Syvarris comes to mind) would absolutely love this. The horse really adds a whole new level of strategy to army building, because by drafting a horse you draft speed. The only issue is the length of the text, but I have no idea how'd one would circumvent that. All in all, a fine custom. Nice job on your first custom! |
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Re: War Horse of Troy -- MegaSilver's Customs
Since my brother is more of a History nut than I am (somewhat, since we both really excel in science), he said that in the Greek period Troy had some of the best trained horses of the area.
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Re: War Horse of Troy -- MegaSilver's Customs
About what you said in the 3FG thread about a SoV nomination, well, I've watched the SoV long enough to know that the War Horse wouldn't get reviewed because it doesn't really have a mini. If you can find a horse mini with wide availability, maybe, but not as it is right now.
It's definitely a good custom though. |
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Re: War Horse of Troy -- MegaSilver's Customs
The "problem" with this idea is that you have taken away the line of sight on the rider by not having him on the horse.
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How would you suggest I rewrite it to correct that issue? |
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Some issues cannot be avoided. |
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Re: War Horse of Troy -- MegaSilver's Customs
Which is probably why Theracus can CARRY a figure but they can't RIDE him.
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