The Book of Ms. Marvel (Kamala)

[tcglkn]

Originally Posted by LordVenoc

Not a huge fan of the "choose one of the following" in the first power and "choose one for this turn" in the second, but not sure if there's a legitimate precedent there.

I do think you're missing the comma before and on Embiggen (I think we tend to include the oxford comma).

Removed the "of the following options" bit from the first power.

Originally Posted by Soundwarp SG-1

Should the stretchy fun times power have an 'only' in the last sentence? Like so:

"Each option may only be chosen once per round."

IDK, sounds a smidge more clear to me, but I'm not a language guy and it would be pretty silly for someone to read the current one as like.. just letting you know choosing a different one each round is an option or something.

Embiggen refers to 'her' without first saying who 'her' is, that seems weird. Feels like it would be better like:

"For the remainder of the round, add 2 to Ms. Marvel's Defense number, each turn you may choose all options for her Morphogenic Mayhem special power and her size and height become large 10."


EDIT: On the yellow thing, would it make more sense to have the lightning bolt looking shape above the life value be the splash of yellow?

Updated both of these and liked the lightning bolt suggestion so that's updated too.

[Lord Pyre]

Cards look great! The minis lipstick does not.

Kumquat dirigible

[IAmBatman]

Originally Posted by Lord Pyre

The minis lipstick does not.

Listen, she's still figuring herself out, OK?