The Book of Beast Man

[Ronin]

Looks okay to me.

[IAmBatman]

Originally Posted by Ronin

Looks okay to me.

Ok thanks!

@Scapemage just need an update, then a johnny vote.

[johnny139]

A quick pass on Beast Mastery, the wording feels a bit strange to me.

BEAST MASTERY
After revealing an Order Marker on this card and before taking a turn with Beast Man, you may choose one figure you control within 6 clear sight spaces of Beast Man that is Common, Uncommon, or a Squad figure, and has the Ferocious, Savage, or Wild personality. Take a turn with the chosen unit. You may not take any additional turns with any figures you control other than Beast Man.

I don't love the use of "unit" here as it's a bit unclear, but I don't think you take turns with "cards" either. We use unit on Nick Fury and it feels a little bit more in line to me?

DIRECTOR OF S.H.I.E.L.D.
After revealing a numbered Order Marker on this card and instead of taking a turn normally with Nick Fury, you may immediately choose one Common or Unique Hero you control to take a turn. Nick Fury may be that chosen hero. If the chosen hero is an Agent, you may also take a turn with an Agent Squad you control. You may choose which unit to activate first.

Yea regardless - the current wording works, it just feels iffy to me. Can anyone think of other cards that mix bonding with heroes and squads? I think it's new ground for C3G honestly.

[IAmBatman]

I don't think "unit" reads as clearly distinct from "figure," whereas if you take a turn with a squad "card" I think it reads pretty clearly that you're taking a turn with the normal amount of figures associated with that card.

[IAmBatman]

Oh, btw, Citizen V, Helmut Zemo, Dracula, Iron Man (Avengers), Nebula, and Pinhead all reference taking a turn with a "card," so I think we're golden on consistency (loving the updated Index, Ronin!).

Edit: So this will pass once it has the needed art update. The SP is in order. I have to finish prepping Bumblebee testing, but I'll try to look into starting up my next one soon.

[Karat]

Seems like maybe doing it like this would help.

BEAST MASTERY
After revealing an Order Marker on this card and before taking a turn with Beast Man, you may choose one figure you control within 6 clear sight spaces of Beast Man that is Common, Uncommon, or a Squad figure, and has the Ferocious, Savage, or Wild personality. Take a turn with the chosen figure. If the chosen figure is a Squad figure, you may take a turn with its entire Squad. You may not take any additional turns with any figures you control other than Beast Man.

[IAmBatman]

I could roll with that, though I'd tweak it to:

BEAST MASTERY
After revealing an Order Marker on this card and before taking a turn with Beast Man, you may choose one figure you control within 6 clear sight spaces of Beast Man that is Common, Uncommon, or a Squad figure, and has the Ferocious, Savage, or Wild personality. Take a turn with the chosen figure or, if the chosen figure is a Squad figure, its entire Squad. You may not take any additional turns with any figures you control other than Beast Man.

Does that look good to folks?

[Karat]

Reads fine to my eyes. Though I'm good with the card language too as we have precedent for that.

[IAmBatman]

SP updated. Just need the art update and we should be good to go. Thanks, all!

[johnny139]

I might switch the order?

Take a turn with the chosen figure, or the chosen figure's Squad if it is a Squad figure. You may not take any additional turns with any figures you control other than Beast Man.

But either works for me.

[IAmBatman]

Yeah, that looks good. Updated.

[Scapemage]

Updated!