Public Design Workshop

[ibechief]

Spoiler Alert!

Name = Barda Free

SPECIES = New God
UNIQUENESS = Unique Hero
CLASS = ?
PERSONALITY = Protective

SIZE/HEIGHT = Medium 6

LIFE = 6

MOVE = 7
RANGE = 5
ATTACK = 5
DEFENSE = 6

POINTS = 370?

APOKALIPTIAN EQUIPMENT
Start the game with the the Glyph of Boom Tube, and the Glyph of Motherbox on this card. Big Barda cannot lose these Equipment Glyphs by any means unless she is destroyed.

MEGA-ROD
When Big Barda attacks an adjacent figure with her normal attack, add 2 dice to her attack and she may choose for this attack to affect one other figure adjacent to both her and her original target.

GLYPH OF APOKALIPTIAN ARMOR
When this figure is attacked with a normal attack, you may roll the 20-sided die. On a roll of 13 or higher, ignore the attack. If the attacking figure has the Super Strength symbol on its Army Card, add 4 to the number rolled. When rolling defense dice against a non-adjacent attack, add one automatic shield to whatever is rolled.

SUPER STRENGTH
FLYING

GLYPH OF MOTHERBOX
After revealing an Order Marker on this figure's card, you may choose 1 figure within 5 clear sight spaces of this figure. You may either:

• Roll the 20-sided die. On a roll of 16 or higher, if that figure is an Android take temporary control of that figure and immediately take a turn with the chosen figure. At the end of that turn, control of the chosen figure returns to the player who controlled the figure before Glyph of Motherbox. All Order Markers that were on the chosen figure's card will stay on the card.

• Remove one Wound Marker from the chosen figure's card and choose any figure within 5 clear sight spaces of this figure to receive a wound.

This removes a glyph while simplifying another. It clears up text and still accomplishes most of what you wanted.

The only issue I see is that there may be a rule issue with choosing to drop a glyph at will during your movement phase if the glyph is permanent since permanent glyphs are supposed to be stationary on the battlefield and not picked up.


edited for control verbiage.

[ibechief]

Originally Posted by Lord Pyre

Mxyzptlk can't be killed by any wounds, actually.

how in the world did I miss that one... Man I'm having a heck of a day today. Time to shut the pc down and go outside.

[Gurei-Ornery]

Originally Posted by ibechief

Spoiler Alert!

Name = Barda Free

SPECIES = New God
UNIQUENESS = Unique Hero
CLASS = ?
PERSONALITY = Protective

SIZE/HEIGHT = Medium 6

LIFE = 6

MOVE = 7
RANGE = 5
ATTACK = 5
DEFENSE = 6

POINTS = 370?

APOKALIPTIAN EQUIPMENT
Start the game with the the Glyph of Boom Tube, and the Glyph of Motherbox on this card. Big Barda cannot lose these Equipment Glyphs by any means unless she is destroyed.

MEGA-ROD
When Big Barda attacks an adjacent figure with her normal attack, add 2 dice to her attack and she may choose for this attack to affect one other figure adjacent to both her and her original target.

GLYPH OF APOKALIPTIAN ARMOR
When this figure is attacked with a normal attack, you may roll the 20-sided die. On a roll of 13 or higher, ignore the attack. If the attacking figure has the Super Strength symbol on its Army Card, add 4 to the number rolled. When rolling defense dice against a non-adjacent attack, add one automatic shield to whatever is rolled.

SUPER STRENGTH
FLYING

GLYPH OF MOTHERBOX
After revealing an Order Marker on this figure's card, you may choose 1 figure within 5 clear sight spaces of this figure. You may either:

• Roll the 20-sided die. On a roll of 16 or higher, if that figure is an Android take control of that figure.

• Remove one Wound Marker from the chosen figure's card and choose any figure within 5 clear sight spaces of this figure to receive a wound.

This removes a glyph while simplifying another. It clears up text and still accomplishes most of what you wanted.

The only issue I see is that there may be a rule issue with choosing to drop a glyph at will during your movement phase if the glyph is permanent since permanent glyphs are supposed to be stationary on the battlefield and not picked up.

Kang does it with the Glyph of Temporal Displacement and he gets to pick it up. So much for permanent.

Also, I don't think any of the suggestions for Motherbox capture the feel of the connection between user and Motherbox. "They provide their owner with unconditional love and self-destruct when their owner dies."

[ibechief]

Originally Posted by Gurei-Ornery

Kang does it with the Glyph of Temporal Displacement and he gets to pick it up. So much for permanent.

Also, I don't think any of the suggestions for Motherbox capture the feel of the connection between user and Motherbox. "They provide their owner with unconditional love and self-destruct when their owner dies."

I just don't know enough about the character to give decent advice here. I just caution you that you dont make a glyph that is more powerful than most 100 point heroes. Try and work as much into Her card as possible. Like was suggested with the armor power.

[Gurei-Ornery]

Originally Posted by ibechief

I just don't know enough about the character to give decent advice here. I just caution you that you dont make a glyph that is more powerful than most 100 point heroes. Try and work as much into Her card as possible. Like was suggested with the armor power.

Well at this point I will just move on to something else since she is drafted. As it stands, I would remove the Armor all together and just add 1 to her defense which makes it 1 better than Wonder Woman, for simplification.

[Smithy Winfred]

Does anyone have the Great 10 drafted (August General, Soviet Red-Guardsman, Immortal-Man-In-darkness).

many of them have figures coming out in future clix releases

[Lord Pyre]

Johnny's got some of them.

[johnny139]

Just August General at the moment; I'd love to see what others have in mind for the team, though.

[quozl]

Originally Posted by Gurei-Ornery

Well at this point I will just move on to something else since she is drafted.

I wish people didn't do this. If I have something drafted and I see some amazing work done on it here, I'd give up the draft to collaborate with the public designer.

[Lord Pyre]

Originally Posted by quozl

I wish people didn't do this. If I have something drafted and I see some amazing work done on it here, I'd give up the draft to collaborate with the public designer.

Yep! We usually have write-ups for most of our drafts, but there are times that the public has better ideas.

[ibechief]

Originally Posted by Gurei-Ornery

Well at this point I will just move on to something else since she is drafted. As it stands, I would remove the Armor all together and just add 1 to her defense which makes it 1 better than Wonder Woman, for simplification.

bummer... I was looking forward to seeing where she was going. I don't know much about her so I was attempting to envision her through the powers placed on her in the design. Sounds like someone on par with Granny Goodness and all that DC god stuff.

Originally Posted by quozl

I wish people didn't do this. If I have something drafted and I see some amazing work done on it here, I'd give up the draft to collaborate with the public designer.

aww dang! Ninja'd by a few hours!

[Tornado]

JUDGE DEATH

Undead
Unique Hero
Dark Judge
Genocidal
Medium 5

Life: 5

Move: 4
Range: 1
Attack: 3
Defense: 6
Points: 290

DEATH SENTENCE SPECIAL ATTACK
Range 1. Attack 3.
Squad figures cannot roll defense dice when attacked with this special attack. Unique heroes attacked with this special attack cannot roll more than 1 defense die. Androids, Undead, and Destructible Objects roll defense dice normally. If Judge Death destroys a figure with this special attack, you may immediately take a turn with any other Undead Hero you control.

DEATH NEVER DIES
When Judge Death is destroyed, you may place his figure on the card of any Undead Unique Hero you control. When a figure with Judge Death on its card attacks and destroys an opponent's figure that is not an Android, Undead, or Destructible Object, you may immediately, if possible, replace the destroyed figure with Judge Death's figure. After placing Judge Death, remove all markers from this card.

DIMENSIONAL TELEPORT
At the end of each round, if there are no more than 2 Wound Markers on this card, you may immediately place Judge Death on any empty space on the battlefield. When Judge Death is moved by Dimensional Teleport do not take any leaving engagement attacks. When Judge Death is moved by Dimensional Teleport, remove 1 Wound Marker from this card.


Karat expressed some concern about the clarity of Death Sentence SA.
Is this better/worse/same?

DEATH SENTENCE SPECIAL ATTACK
Range 1. Attack 3.
Squad figures cannot roll defense dice when attacked with this special attack. Unique heroes attacked with this special attack cannot roll more than 1 defense die. Androids, Undead, and destructible objects may not be targeted by this special attackroll defense dice normally. If Judge Death destroys a figure with this special attack, you may immediately take a turn with any other Undead Hero you control.

I am highly considering changing the requirement to take a turn with another Undead Hero to inflicting a wound instead of destroying a figure. I still need to do some playtesting with him. Death, Grundy and Frankenstein should be an interesting combo with Solomon being able to 'bond' with both Death and Bolts. Grundy, Death and Silver Banshee may be better though with her Magical Defense keeping her around, hopefully long enough, to bring both Death and Grundy back after they are destroyed.