The Book of Phantom Stranger

[IAmBatman]

Sweet! Any preferences out there between 450 and 460? That seems to be the sweet spot and I don't think he'll be broken at either.

Any particularly desirable combos for those point levels? I do know JLAers tend to have 100 and 50 endings, so that might be a consideration.

Edit: Arkham

[Karat]

I'm good with either cost.

[IAmBatman]

OK, let's play it safe then and go with 460! I propose we move to Final Editing!

[Arkham]

Yea

[Lord Pyre]

Yea

[tcglkn]

Yea.

[Karat]

Yea

[IAmBatman]

That's four Hero votes and me, which is good enough for me! This passes!

Please let me know if there's anything you need for art that is missing, @Arkham !

[Karat]

Some minor edits.

MYSTERIOUS GUIDANCE
After any attack dice, defense dice, or the 20-sided die is rolled for Phantom Stranger, a figure you control, or an Event Hero within 8 clear sight spaces, or for Phantom Stranger, you may remove an unrevealed Order Marker from this card and immediately add or subtract a skull, blank, shield, or 2 from that roll.

CRISIS MANAGEMENT
At the end of the round, you may remove the “X” Order Marker from this card to choose Phantom Stranger or a friendly figure within 3 clear sight spaces. Remove a Wound Marker from the chosen figure's Army Card and then you may place a previously removed Marker from their card, other than an Order Marker, back onto their card, if possible.

For pasteability:

MYSTERIOUS GUIDANCE
After any attack dice, defense dice, or the 20-sided die is rolled for Phantom Stranger, a figure you control, or an Event Hero within 8 clear sight spaces, you may remove an unrevealed Order Marker from this card and immediately add or subtract a skull, blank, shield, or 2 from that roll.

CRISIS MANAGEMENT
At the end of the round, you may remove the “X” Order Marker from this card to choose Phantom Stranger or a friendly figure within 3 clear sight spaces. Remove a Wound Marker from the chosen figure's Army Card and then you may place a previously removed Marker from their card, other than an Order Marker, back onto their card, if possible.

[IAmBatman]

Don’t like how that reads. It’s less clear there that the figure you control and the Event Hero both have to be within 8 spaces in order to trigger.

[Karat]

Originally Posted by Karat

Some minor edits.

For pasteability:

Fixed?

The big problem I see is it is such a convoluted sentence.

[johnny139]

I would just do "Phantom Stranger, or any figure you control or Event Hero within 8 clear sight spaces of Phantom Stranger," and be 100% explicit about it.

And I think the last clause in that power needs a "to" in there. We have "add or subtract" from a roll, but you don't add from things. I think? This is more traditional grammar, not my strong suit.