The Book of Faith Herbert

[johnny139]

I guess my only question is whether her first power also gives her disengage - I don't think so, since she's not being moved "with this power," but I can see someone reading it the other way.

Simple but solid. I do think she'll probably be defined as running with the Crime Fighters, but other than the Psiots, I think those are her most natural allies.

[Yodaking]

Yeah I like the auto-skull DO connection, really gets that throwing them into something vibe going. 3 att. + the auto-skull isn't bad for a 90 point figure. Seems like a fun power set overall, just flying around picking up either an ally or opponent. Not sure about the use of Companion in the power name though, I was looking for some hook with our Companion cards as a result, but it wasn't there. Unless it's specifically called that in the book, I'd go with something like Ally.

[LordVenoc]

Originally Posted by Tornado

Also need a size restriction on the SA unless she can grab Huge figures.
I think what will drive up her cost is Crime Fighter. She can bond with Luke Cage and move him forward before he takes his turn which is really nice.
Looks good.

Large may work, but Huge would be a no-go. Good catch.

Vulture has thief synergies going for him. Not saying one is better than the other, but that does leave me hoping we can keep her 120 or under, with 90-100 probably being my ideal spot. That Luke Cage combo is definitely a nice one for his mobility.

Originally Posted by johnny139

I guess my only question is whether her first power also gives her disengage - I don't think so, since she's not being moved "with this power," but I can see someone reading it the other way.

Simple but solid. I do think she'll probably be defined as running with the Crime Fighters, but other than the Psiots, I think those are her most natural allies.

Yeah I think it may take wording tweaks. The current wording comes off of Vulture, and he has Stealth Flying so probably wasn't a concern there.

I don't mind that actually. She's run with Unity and had her solo, so her making friends outside the Renegades is totally cool with me.

Originally Posted by Yodaking

Yeah I like the auto-skull DO connection, really gets that throwing them into something vibe going. 3 att. + the auto-skull isn't bad for a 90 point figure. Seems like a fun power set overall, just flying around picking up either an ally or opponent. Not sure about the use of Companion in the power name though, I was looking for some hook with our Companion cards as a result, but it wasn't there. Unless it's specifically called that in the book, I'd go with something like Ally.

It is specifically called that. I don't mind a generic name if we want for reuseability, as her marquee stuff already exists in the SA.

[japes]

Of all of them she'd definitely be the one to run around with Spidey. She's the one most interested in being a super hero.

[Lord Pyre]

Looks good! I'm fine with her as a Crime Fighter. My only thought is if we could specify a terrain piece or something other than a DO? I rarely ever actually use DO's, but like having ruins and tress as LOS blockers. Technically I wouldn't be able to use that part of her power if I don't play the trees as destructible.

[Tornado]

Could terrain feature be added into power?

[Ronin]

I think "obstacle" is your technical term for non destructible stuff.

[johnny139]

I did try and brainstorm a way to correctly word "terrain with a height level above that figure's height" but couldn't think of an ironclad way to do so. Just tossing obstacle in there would probably do the trick.

[LordVenoc]

Alright, updated post breathing period now. Seems like people are generally pretty cool with the state of things, so I'll be running the checklists in the morning and proposing initial then assuming no issues arise between now and then. I'm feeling starting around 100 or 110 with the tweaks, but more seasoned costers can feel free to point me in a closer direction.

[LordVenoc]

Here's the checklists. I propose we move to Initial Playtesting.

COMPETITIVE REVIEW BOARD CHECKLIST

Spoiler Alert!

1. Does the design disrupt opponent's Order Markers in a way that offers a net gain in turns taken with strong figures versus the turns your opponent can take with strong figures (Ozymandias, Joker (I), Meteorite)?
   
2. Does the design offer auto-wounding that either doesn't require taking turns or is otherwise extremely efficient (War Machine, Jason Voorhees, Cosmic Cube)?
   
   Nope
   
3. Does the design immobilize figures or prevent turn-taking (Blob, Spider-Girl, Diablo, Green Lantern Alan)?
   
   Nope
   
4. Does the design move opponent's figures in a way that's easy to pull off and can move figures multiple spaces in multiple directions (Graviton, Magneto, Vulture)?
   
   Can move opponent's figures, but only one per turn. Lack of stealth flying makes it harder to do safely.
   
5. Does the design allow for moving friendly figures without taking turns, or for moving 2+ friendly figures while still taking a turn (Martian Manhunter [I], Green Lantern John, Angel)?
   
   She can pick up friendly figures, but only one.
   
6. Does the figure allow for two figures, one of them being a wide range of possible figures, to both attack on a single Order Marker (Zombie, Robot, Iron Patriot, Ms. Marvel, Rocket [II], Martian Manhunter [II], Nebula, Baby Groot, Havok)?
   
   Nope
   
7. Does the design offer any sort of passive boost outside of a narrow set of figures (Star-Lord, Sage, Brainiac 5, Captain America, Batman [III])?
   
   Nope
   
8. Does the design help keep your allies alive just by being nearby (Daring Decoy, Aaron Cash, Jocasta, Weather Wizard)?
   
   Nope
   
9. Is it OK for the design to have defensive abilities that could make it essentially unkillable in some matchups or endgame situations (Cosmic Cube, Healing Factor, Master Martial Artist)?
   
   No issues here
   
10. If the figure has auto-destroy powers or powers that can force the opponent's figures to attack each other, are they balanced for strong opposing figures and/or boosts that can make the powers more reliable (Puppet Master, Psycho-Man, Enchantress)?
    
    Nope
    
11. Is the figure likely to earn its value many times over by either running out alone at the start of a battle (pre-eval Crow, Solomon Grundy) or by sitting in the startzone until the end of a battle (Arnim Zola, Silk Spectre)?
    
    Nope
    
12. Will synergies in the design create concerns for future designs (Mad Thinker, pre-eval Enchantress, Star-Lord)?
    
    Nope
    
13. Does the design combo particularly well with one of the design concerns above (Magma)?
    
    Nope
    

CONSISTENCY CHECKLIST (SHORT FORM)

Spoiler Alert!

Consistency Concerns
Name and Identity
Verify character is named in a way that is clear, accurate and feels consistent with the way other characters are named.

She really should probably just be Faith Herbert rather than Faith (Faith Herbert). We could use Zephyr here, but she doesn't use it much.

Uniqueness and Type
Verify that the power text reflects the listed uniqueness and type, that the uniqueness fits the character, and that squad size is listed for squads.

Check

Left Box
If the character's species, class or personality is reused, verify that the character feels thematically consistent with other figures that have that species, class or personality. If they are not reused, verify that there is no pre-existing species, class or personality that would make more sense.

Check, all reuses here

Size and Height
Verify that the listed size and height are accurate. Standing the mini up next to a stack of tiles, and a few other minis of various sizes, is encouraged.

Need to double check this, may wind up at 4 as she's a bit short

Super Strength and Flying
Verify that these special powers are present if they make sense, and not if they don't.

She can fly. Its her shtick.

New Powers - Names
Verify that any new powers are not using power names identical to, or very similar to, pre-existing powers. Verify that any new powers are actually new and not old powers with new names.

All new. Companion field separates itself from the similar vulture grab.

New Powers - Effects
Verify that the effect and timing of all new powers is clear. Verify that any logical immunities, benefits, or weaknesses (whether those be necessary for thematic or mechanical reasons) are implemented: consider whether defensive powers that work against normal attacks should also work against special attacks, whether or not a power has an elemental component that some figures should resist, and whether or not unliving figures (such as Undead and Androids) should be affected.

Should be clarified now.

Reused Powers
Verify that the design is reusing powers in place of creating new ones, where reused powers could implement the same theme and mechanics with no differences or only trivial differences. Verify that any reused powers have the correct text.

Nothing reused here.

Power Level
Verify that the character's movement, attack, range, and defense (in conjunction with any special powers that enhance those stats) feel consistent with the capabilities of characters with analogous powers and abilities. Verify that the character falls into a similar point range to characters with comparative powers and abilities.

She's not super athletic or strong (5 move, 2 attack). The defense is a bit of a representation of using her field in some light force field manners (another capability of hers).

[Lord Pyre]

Yea

[Tornado]

Yea