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Old November 4th, 2017, 03:46 AM
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Old November 4th, 2017, 01:19 PM
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Re: Helterave

I have to say this guy looks very fun! His stats are mostly good, and his abilities mesh very nicely.
Honestly, though, 7 Life seems pretty high. I would drop it to 5 at the least.
You should also be aware that the Roman Legionnaires are Disciplined and already bond with Warlords, which could cause problems (i.e. Romans can take a turn before Helterave, but Helterave can also take a turn before the Romans...and after that's sorted out, the Romans can go again with Warlord's Orders).
Please don't be discouraged by that block of criticism! There's a lot that works here, and I'm excited to see more of your work in the future.
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Old November 4th, 2017, 02:03 PM
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Re: Helterave

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I have to say this guy looks very fun! His stats are mostly good, and his abilities mesh very nicely.
Honestly, though, 7 Life seems pretty high. I would drop it to 5 at the least.
You should also be aware that the Roman Legionnaires are Disciplined and already bond with Warlords, which could cause problems (i.e. Romans can take a turn before Helterave, but Helterave can also take a turn before the Romans...and after that's sorted out, the Romans can go again with Warlord's Orders).
Please don't be discouraged by that block of criticism! There's a lot that works here, and I'm excited to see more of your work in the future.
Oh not at all! That is why he has no point value right now, because I am not finished with him. Posted him over for feedback. I have a few others I am working on here -

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Old November 4th, 2017, 02:17 PM
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Re: Helterave

@Dark_Stranger I wasn't familiar with Roman Legionnaires, so I looked them up, and I see the problem now. That would be really tricky. One thing I could do is change Helterave from a "warlord" to a "conqueror"
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Old November 4th, 2017, 07:24 PM
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Re: Helterave

Interesting and not too radically different from Torquemada.

He ruled through fear as well.
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Re: Helterave

Also! You might want to just keep all your customs in one thread.
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Old November 8th, 2017, 10:52 PM
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