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C3G Legacy Library This is the archive for all the designs released in the original era of C3G. Feel free to post any figure specific questions in their individual books. |
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Re: The Book of Rocket Raccoon II - Final Editing
It just passed to Final Editing and I don't think Ronin has been on today, he's been the top word smith of late. I can go and edit the SP a bit to make the use of Rocket consistent.
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#326
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Re: The Book of Rocket Raccoon II - Final Editing
Only wording issue I can see is that "he" is unclear in Ragtag. I'm guessing that "he" is Rocket.
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#327
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Re: The Book of Rocket Raccoon II - Final Editing
Changed the first use of 'he' to Rocket to clarify that, the use of 'he' and 'his' after that though I think are clear.
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#328
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Re: The Book of Rocket Raccoon II - Final Editing
It still seems a little awkward. Let me try:
RAG-TAG RINGLEADER If no Unique Heroes in your army have the same Species or Class and at least one Order Marker is on this card, immediately after revealing an Order Marker on the Army Card of Rocket or a Unique Hero within 4 clear sight spaces of Rocket, before taking a turn with that Hero, Rocket may attack an opponent's figure with his normal attack. If he does, and Rocket was not that Hero, you may only take turns with that Hero this player turn. |
#329
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Re: The Book of Rocket Raccoon II - Final Editing
updated
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#330
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Re: The Book of Rocket Raccoon II - Public PT
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Would I want it to be everything I love...sure...but that's just not realistic so I'm going to focus on finding things that will make me unhappy and work on fixing those. |
#331
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Re: The Book of Rocket Raccoon II - Final Editing
Thanks Japes, good to know you didn't have any reservations.
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#332
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Re: The Book of Rocket Raccoon II
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#333
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Re: The Book of Rocket Raccoon II - Final Editing
Updated, thanks Ronin. I think you should be good to go now Arkham.
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#334
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Re: The Book of Rocket Raccoon II - Final Editing
Cards posted
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#336
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Re: The Book of Rocket Raccoon II - Final Editing
Awesome stuff. Yea to On Deck.
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