The Book of Yellow Lantern (Hank Henshaw)

[japes]

Originally Posted by quozl

No, Ultron can already do the same thing with the penguins.

Got it.

[Flame Gryphon]

Okay, so, it doesn't fit onto a card with minimum text and leading (5.8 and 6.2, respectively), so we may need to trim some fat here before I do the initial. Just thought I'd mention that now, since we might need to change or remove some powers. If we can trim a line or two, it should be fine.

[japes]

All the powers are pretty short and I wouldn't want to lose any but if something has to go...

Originally Posted by Flame Gryphon

MANHUNTER GRANDMASTER
When a figure you control moves with the Manhunting special power, it may move one additional space. If the figure chosen for the Manhunting special power is destroyed, you may choose a different figure for the Manhunting special

[IAmBatman]

Agreed. Tough card to trim for sure. Most of the powers you'd pretty much have to cut completely if you started trimming.

[Flame Gryphon]

I'm not sure what the minimum leading between powers is, which might also help. Any ideas?

@japes @A3n

[johnny139]

I feel like Yellow Power Blast and Manhunter Grandmaster can be trimmed some without losing too much. Not sure if it's enough to clear a line, but... could help.

Before:

YELLOW POWER BLAST SPECIAL ATTACK
Range 3 + Special. Attack 3 + Special.
Start the game with 4 yellow Battery Markers on this card. Before attacking with this special attack, remove a yellow Battery Marker from this card, if possible. Add 1 to this special attack's Range and Attack numbers for each yellow Battery Marker on this card.

MANHUNTER GRANDMASTER
When a figure you control moves with the Manhunting special power, it may move one additional space. If the figure chosen for the Manhunting special power is destroyed, you may choose a different figure for the Manhunting special power.

After:

YELLOW POWER BLAST SPECIAL ATTACK
Range 5. Attack 3 + Special.
Start the game with 4 yellow Battery Markers on this card. Before attacking with this special attack, remove a yellow Battery Marker from this card. Roll 1 additional attack die for each yellow Battery Marker on this card.

MANHUNTER GRANDMASTER
When a friendly figure moves with the Manhunting special power, it may move one additional space. If the figure chosen for the Manhunting special power is destroyed, you may choose another figure.

[japes]

Originally Posted by Flame Gryphon

I'm not sure what the minimum leading between powers is, which might also help. Any ideas?

@japes @A3n

I've used 4 before but anything less usually looks to crowded.

[japes]

Originally Posted by johnny139

I feel like Yellow Power Blast and Manhunter Grandmaster can be trimmed some without losing too much. Not sure if it's enough to clear a line, but... could help.

Before:

After:

it has the added bonus of removing the "if Possible" which for some reason bothered me.


FG give it a go with these changes and the 4 point leading between powers & try 5.8 and 6.4 for the rest of the text. If that doesn't cut it I'd still say the only hope is to lose the movement bonus but hopefully that works.

[IAmBatman]

Those look like solid edits to me.

[Karat]

Thematically speaking, should he only boost Manhunters, or any figure woth the manhunting special power?

[IAmBatman]

Originally Posted by Karat

Thematically speaking, should he only boost Manhunters, or any figure woth the manhunting special power?

Only Manhunters. They're the only ones with the power currently, but I suppose it could be reused.

[IAmBatman]

So good catch. Meaning it needs to be:

MANHUNTER GRANDMASTER
When a Manhunter you control moves with the Manhunting special power, it may move one additional space. If the figure chosen for the Manhunting special power is destroyed, you may choose another figure.