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Re: The Book of Big Barda
'the peace and quiet domestic life' makes no sense - should be peaceful. Otherwise cleared.
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Re: The Book of Big Barda
Might be missing an "of"? Which would make it: "...the peace and quiet of domestic life."
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Re: The Book of Big Barda
That works.
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Re: The Book of Big Barda
I think "peace and quiet of" was what I was going for, but reading it again, I think "quiet and peaceful" works better. I actually did a brief rewrite for the bio in general, trimming some redundancies.
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Re: The Book of Big Barda
Cards are good here as well. Still <3 Barda.
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