The Book of Tracer

[Lord Pyre]

Without knowing anything about Overwatch, I think Adventurer is cool. Skin, I'd probably just look at the characters in each proposed class and see which group you feel like she'd hang out with and get along with the most.

Crime Fighting also doesn't mean absolutely following the law, its just stopping crime. Spider-Man absolutely has not been on the side of the police when the other option is the morally right option.

But that fiddliness aside, design looks good. She's a very solid Adventurer (Or whatever) Sidekick, having 2 attacks of most-likely 5 (With all her zipping around and teleporting). Wouldn't be surprised to see her cost higher just because adding two attacks onto other turns is a lot.

For the last power I might just say "Within 2/3 spaces of the space she started on this round" rather than the whole closest possible thing. I don't believe we've used that language and it feels like it could be exploited in really weird ways.

[Arkham]

She usually doesn't blink very far right? Like a few feet? Maybe lower it to 1 space since she's now doing it up to 3 times a turn and for free? Still essentially a move of 8 with the benefits of flying and disengage mixed in.

[Skinderella]

Game wise she blinks 7.5 metres. Lore wise she's used it to travel pretty far in one blink, like between buildings, so I wouldn't say it's a short blink.






Perhaps just 2 blinks a turn, which would match the 2 attacks per turn.

[Skinderella]

Perhaps to this? Keeps everything to 2. 2 attacks, and 2 blinks that move 2 spaces.

CHRONAL DEXTERITY
Tracer may attack with her normal attack up to 2 times at any point during her normal move as long as she is on a space where she could end her movement. Up to 2 times at any point during her normal move, you may place Tracer on an empty space within 2 spaces of her current position that is no more than 10 levels above or below her base.

[Arkham]

You could probably streamline:

CHRONAL DEXTERITY
Tracer may attack normally and Blink up to 2 times at any point during her normal move as long as she is on a space where she could end her movement. To Blink, place Tracer on an empty space within 2 spaces of her current position that is no more than 10 levels above or below her base.

[Skinderella]

I like that, thank you! My only concern might be if people read that she attacks and blinks together, rather than being able to do any of them in any order.

[Arkham]

Adding one word should help?

CHRONAL DEXTERITY
Tracer may attack normally and Blink up to 2 times each at any point during her normal move as long as she is on a space where she could end her movement. To Blink, place Tracer on an empty space within 2 spaces of her current position that is no more than 10 levels above or below her base.

[Skinderella]

Sweet, thank you! I'll update the SP, I think we've hit a good spot here.

Do we need to revote here since she's changed a little, or does this pass since it's been 3 days?

[Arkham]

Not sure. I think you should be fine as long as you got the votes. yea again either way

[Skinderella]

Still needing one more vote here then.

[Skinderella]

Still needing one more yea here.

[Lord Pyre]

I didn’t see the proposal sorry. Yea