The Book of Bolivar Trask

[Ronin]

EPB looks good!

[Lazy Orang]

The second sentence and parts of the last paragraph ('turns against him' and 'orders him') lapse into present tense while the rest of the bio uses the past tense - that desperately needs correcting. The second paragraph (which is a one sentence paragraph... do we want to fuse it with another?) doesn't have a full stop at the end, so it needs that. Also not massively fond of beginning a sentence with a conjunction - I'd change 'But Trask' to 'However, Trask' at the beginning of paragraph three. Also, the second paragraph is lacking in punctuation - we need some commas there, I get out of breath reading it aloud.
Otherwise, we're good here.

[Lazy Orang]

Noticed other issues and edited last post.

[japes]

Originally Posted by Lazy Orang

The second sentence and parts of the last paragraph ('turns against him' and 'orders him') lapse into present tense while the rest of the bio uses the past tense - that desperately needs correcting. The second paragraph (which is a one sentence paragraph... do we want to fuse it with another?) doesn't have a full stop at the end, so it needs that. Also not massively fond of beginning a sentence with a conjunction - I'd change 'But Trask' to 'However, Trask' at the beginning of paragraph three. Also, the second paragraph is lacking in punctuation - we need some commas there, I get out of breath reading it aloud.
Otherwise, we're good here.

Thanks LO...Feel free to edit that.

[Lazy Orang]

Okay, done that, since I suddenly seem to be a Moderator now when I wasn't half an hour ago. Can someone tell me what all these whizzy things seem to do!

[Karat]

Originally Posted by Lazy Orang

Okay, done that, since I suddenly seem to be a Moderator now when I wasn't half an hour ago. Can someone tell me what all these whizzy things seem to do!

It's a hero perk I'm still learning them all myself, but basically you now have the power to move, lock, and delete threads and posts and you can edit any post...that's as much of it that I have learned thus far just by carefully playing around with the options (don't want to cause any snafus).

[quozl]

Do all the testing you want in this thread:

https://www.heroscapers.com/communit...ad.php?t=33863

[Scapemage]

It has been very useful to be a moderator. I use it most to move threads to On Deck once they're finished, edit my art into the OP of threads, and delete double posts from tagging.

[Ronin]

Should we rotate out mod permissions for some of the old Heroes that aren't around anymore? I feel like we're only supposed to have so many mods.

[Karat]

Originally Posted by Ronin

Should we rotate out mod permissions for some of the old Heroes that aren't around anymore? I feel like we're only supposed to have so many mods.

That might be a good idea. I'd probably leave it for some of the more active legends though.

[japes]

Originally Posted by Ronin

Should we rotate out mod permissions for some of the old Heroes that aren't around anymore? I feel like we're only supposed to have so many mods.

That's my admin responsibility. I keep us in a safe range. All active Heroes as well as active legends that use it should have it. So this is one area you don't need to worry about. Only one person that I've dropped over the past few years even commented on it. So I assume I'm choosing wisely. Adding LO was an oversight due to it taking me a few weeks of catching up to realize she'd been promoted. No one tagged me to let me know I needed to change anything.

[japes]

Originally Posted by Lazy Orang

Okay, done that, since I suddenly seem to be a Moderator now when I wasn't half an hour ago. Can someone tell me what all these whizzy things seem to do!

Yeah that was me. You probably want to stick with editing and simple stuff for now. Merging and moving are a bit more risky. Just remember what uncle Ben always says. Ben Parker not the rice guy.