The Book of Eternal Warrior

[Ronin]

Is there another Eternal Warrior we might design? Don't need "(Gilad Anni-Padda) at the top of the book unless there's an Eternal Warrior that's not Gilad Anni-Padda.

PDFs look off-center/low-res here.

On Tactical Interpose, I'd prefer:

TACTICAL INTERPOSE
After revealing an Order Marker on the card of an engaged figure you control, you may immediately move Eternal Warrior up to 2 spaces. If Eternal Warrior ends this move adjacent to an engaged figure you control, you may immediately switch that figure and Eternal Warrior. Switched figures never take leaving engagement attacks.

There are other cards that claim you reveal OMs on figures, though. I know Beta Ray Bill does.

[LordVenoc]

While we're at that, it is probably good to ask @johnny139 (as I don't think anyone has read up on this guy quite yet) how he'd feel about updating to The Eternal Warrior from Eternal Warrior. I lean towards maybe needing the "the" but am not 100% solid on it.

[tcglkn]

I would argue against adding The here simply because that would cause us to have to adjust the size of the font in his name to get it to fit.

[LordVenoc]

Originally Posted by tcglkn

I would argue against adding The here simply because that would cause us to have to adjust the size of the font in his name to get it to fit.

That logic works for me. Especially when we'd have to add it in the text. Updated.

[LordVenoc]

@Arkham should be ready to do the final update here.

[Arkham]

updated

[Sporx]

Poker is missing the final power - A Coward’s Reward.

[Lazy Orang]

First sentence would read better as : 'Gilad is one of {cut} three immortal brothers, sibling to Armstrong and Ivar.' or 'Gilad is one of the three immortal brothers, alongside Armstrong and Ivar.'
This sentence:
'Gilad is known as the Fist and Steel, a man gifted with immortality to protect the Geomancer, a long line of mystics in tune with the Earth against the forces of dark gods, such as Nergal or the Immortal Enemy.'
reads terribly, and I don't really know what to suggest because I'm not quite sure what it's getting at.
'brother's' in the last sentence of paragraph one has an errant and incorrect apostrophe.

[LordVenoc]

Originally Posted by Lazy Orang

First sentence would read better as : 'Gilad is one of {cut} three immortal brothers, sibling to Armstrong and Ivar.' or 'Gilad is one of the three immortal brothers, alongside Armstrong and Ivar.'
This sentence:
'Gilad is known as the Fist and Steel, a man gifted with immortality to protect the Geomancer, a long line of mystics in tune with the Earth against the forces of dark gods, such as Nergal or the Immortal Enemy.'
reads terribly, and I don't really know what to suggest because I'm not quite sure what it's getting at.
'brother's' in the last sentence of paragraph one has an errant and incorrect apostrophe.

Immortal Brothers is actually a title, so I capitalized it. I think my breaking up of that weird sentence is better and clearer now if you want to take a look.

[Tornado]

First try at a track.

Spoiler Alert!

[Tornado]

Originally Posted by MrNobody

So it would need to be 5 spaces long, right? Reading through the thread, LV said that he returns to the land of the living by passing through a big gate of some kind, so maybe that could be the final space. I'll see what else I can dig up for little thematic touches, then maybe you can help me put the whole thing together, T?

See above.

[MrNobody]

That’s awesome!