Spider-Man (Ultimate) (Conversion) FINAL EDITING

[Skinderella]

Welcome back! Cool to see this guy converted and looks good to me!

Along with what Karat said, the character traits like Uniqueness etc should all caps too.

Don't forget to link your 1.0 design in the OP!

[MrNobody]

Seems like there isn't much motion here, so once you do the suggested updates you're probably good to propose a vote for final editing?

[Alexandros]

Hey folks, sorry for the slow response. Something of a chaotic weekend for me. I've made the suggested changes to the OP I think, unless I'm missing something.

How do you propose a vote for final editing? Just tag the heroes?

[Karat]

You just make a bolded statement stating you propose it for Final Editing.

Pre-Yea for editing

[Alexandros]

I propose we move this to final editing.

[Arch-vile]

yea

I would update the thread title so people know that a vote is going on.

[MrNobody]

Yea

[Ericth74]

yea

[japes]

yea

[IAmBatman]

yea though you only need 5 votes, so you can call this as having passed (usually we bold the calling of the vote too) and update the thread title to Final Editing.

At that point basically ask for one more pass at the wording and when you feel relatively confident, update the thread title to "Ready for Art."

[Alexandros]

This passes.

Can we get one more pass at the wording here? I know there was some concern about the Step Up power and whether or not it needs to reference Ultimate Sacrifice.

[IAmBatman]

Yeah, I think we can cut the ability reference in the third ability, since he's taking the wounds from the attacker instead of his ally taking them.

STEP UP
If Spider-Man or an ally within 4 clear spaces of him takes 1+ wounds from an enemy's attack, during your next turn Spider-Man has +2 Attack when making an adjacent attack against that enemy.