The Book of Werewolf (Jacob Russoff)

[Karat]

How does this look for a bio?

Victim of an ancient family curse, Jacob Russoff has battled with his bestial alter-ego. Known simply as the Werewolf when in his bestial state, Jacob fights savagely and has been known to lose control going into a frenzy and killing the target of his rage. He briefly joined Ghost Rider, Man-Thing, and Morbius in the Legion of Monsters. Jacob sought constantly to find a way to control his bestial form, but only by embracing it and fully accepting it as a part of himself has he been able to gain full control over himself and the best of both his bestial and human selves.

I paraphrased a lot of it. I'm sure @johnny139 or @Spidey'tilIDie might be able come up with something better.

[Viegon]

Looks good to me. Some suggested edits:

Originally Posted by Karat

Victim of an ancient family curse, Jacob Russoff has battled with his bestial alter-ego most of his life. Known simply as the Werewolf when in his bestial state, Jacob fights savagely and has been known to lose control, going into a frenzy and killing the target of his rage. He briefly joined Ghost Rider, Man-Thing, and Morbius in the Legion of Monsters. Jacob sought constantly for a long time to find a way to control his bestial form, but only by embracing it and fully accepting it as a part of himself has he been able to gain full control over himself and the best of both his bestial and human selves it.

Is the section I colored navy needed? It seems to interrupt the flow in my opinion. My .

[Karat]

Originally Posted by Viegon

Looks good to me. Some suggested edits:

Is the section I colored navy needed? It seems to interrupt the flow in my opinion. My .

No, I don't think it's needed but it seemed like a potentially big thing so I put it in there but could be easily pulled.

[TrollBrute]

My attempts at an edit:

Originally Posted by Karat

Victim of an ancient family curse, Jacob Russoff has battled with his bestial alter-ego for most of his life. Known simply as the Werewolf when in his savage state, Jacob fights viciously and has been known to lose control, going into a frenzy and killing the target of his rage. Jacob sought for a long time to find a way to control his bestial form, but only by embracing it as a part of himself has he been able to gain full control over both his lupine and human sides. Now he fights evil as Jack Russell by day, and Werewolf by night!

[Karat]

Originally Posted by TrollBrute

My attempts at an edit:

I like that