The Book of Captain Marvel (Mary Batson)

[Ronin]

Not opinionated on the commas in "S, H, and A" otherwise, but it feels like the second and third ones are a unit. I wouldn't get rid of one and keep the other. Tempting to keep 2 and 3 and replace comma 1 with a semi-colon. I don't think the power quite sets off my "oh god so many commas" senses in the way that some other Heroscape powers do though.

Speaking of which...

Originally Posted by IAmBatman

SHAZAM!: SHARED POWER
Once per round, after revealing an Order Marker on this card and before taking a turn with Captain Marvel, you may take a turn with up to two other Unique Heroes you control that are either a Human Captain Marvel or that have a SHAZAM! special power. You may not take additional turns with other figures you control. During this player turn, all figures you control subtract one die from their attack.

Red just to make it a little less comma-intensive.The blue is speculative but seems like a good idea? No idea what plans are for the faction, though. I'm pretty sure based on conversations we've had that we don't need the scratched-out bit.

SHAZAM!: SHARED POWER
Once per round, after revealing an Order Marker on this card and before taking a turn with Captain Marvel, you may take a turn with up to two other Unique Heroes you control that have a SHAZAM! special power. You may not take additional turns with other figures you control. During this player turn, all figures you control subtract one die from their attack.