The Book of Long Halloween

[fret_gurglo]

Yea

[IAmBatman]

That was fast! This passes. Not sure if we have any dedicated wording peoples these days, but if anyone is up for giving the powers a once over before I ask for carding, it'd be greatly appreciated.

[tcglkn]

Originally Posted by IAmBatman

NAME = HOLIDAY: LONG HALLOWEEN STORY CARD

POINTS = 80

STORY PROLOGUE =
• A figure named Calendar Man and at least two other Unique Heroes that are Misfits must be in your army.
• No other Holiday Story Card may be in your army.

STORY SETUP =
At the start of the game, place the one orange Holiday Marker on this card, then choose two Unique Heroes in your army that are Misfits. Calendar Man cannot be chosen. Secretly write down each chosen Misfit's name. Any Each chosen Misfit is considered to be a Killer.

STORY RULES =

HOLIDAY KILLINGS
Before placing Order Markers each round, if your Holiday Marker is on this card, you must place it on the Army Card of an opponent’s Unique (or Event)? Hero, if possible. Any Unique Hero figure with a Holiday Marker on its card subtracts 2 from its Defense number when attacked by a Misfit you control. If an unrevealed Killer you control attacks a figure with a Holiday marker on its card and inflicts one or more wounds, you may reveal it as a Killer and inflict one additional wound on the defending figure. If a figure with your Holiday Marker on its card is destroyed, return that marker to this card.

A MURDERER'S MIND
While Calendar Man is on his Army Card and is not destroyed, you may only place Order Markers on the Army Cards of Calendar Man or Misfits you control. While you control one or more (unrevealed?) Killers, you may not place Calendar Man on the battlefield.

CASE CLOSED
When a Misfit you control is destroyed, you must reveal if it was a Killer. When your last Killer is revealed, remove the Holiday Marker and this card from the game.

I don't think it matters if you remove the Holiday Marker from the game since without the card it does nothing. I assume the intent of Murderer's Mind is that it only works if you have unrevealed Killers, since the story goes away when you do not have any Killer's unrevealed.

[IAmBatman]

Sure. I just thought specifying the unrevealed part was redundant due to removing the card from the game. I'm fine adding it, though, if y'all feel the clarification is needed.

Thanks for the wording check! Going to stick with it just affecting Unique Heroes as I think the Holiday Killer going after Godzilla feels out of the bounds of the theme here.

[tcglkn]

Either way you needed clarification there since you just said Army Card of an opponent's hero.

[IAmBatman]

SP updated. I also specified "your" Holiday Marker in the Holiday Killings part for the defense subtraction just to avoid any weirdness in multiplayer matches or mirror matches.

[Dr. Jekyll]

Sorry for the delay here. Cards are up

Edit: fixing the "Story Name" on the back card now lol

[tcglkn]

If you are going to put the marker on the PDF, you need to make sure that the cards still line up so people can print it front and back here. As you have it laid out, that would be basically impossible for people to do. Probably need to do something like the Flesh to Stone spell here.

[IAmBatman]

Thanks, Dr. J.! Cards look great!

Sounds like the marker thing needs a fix (good catch, Tickle), and then I'll put up a proposal for On Deck.

[Dr. Jekyll]

Them there cards be updated!

[IAmBatman]

Looks like we're all set! Thanks, Dr. J.!

Let's go On Deck!
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@Arkham - yea
@MrNobody - yea
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[Arkham]

Interesting design!

Unfortunately one capitalization missed @Dr. Jekyll :

HOLIDAY KILLINGS
Before placing Order Markers each round, if your Holiday Marker is on this card, you must place it on the Army Card of an opponent’s Unique Hero, if possible. Any figure with your Holiday Marker on its card subtracts 2 from its Defense number when attacked by a Misfit you control. If an unrevealed Killer you control attacks a figure with a Holiday Marker on its card and inflicts one or more wounds, you may reveal it as a Killer and inflict one additional wound on the defending figure. If a figure with your Holiday Marker on its card is destroyed, return that marker to this card.

Yea