The Taeles of Taelord and Cyprien:Sleep in fear

[scottishlad5]

Originally Posted by Onacara

I cant read the text even when I click on the individual pics to enlarge them.

Sorry, I'll try and make that better too.

[scottishlad5]

Anything positive?

[scottishlad5]

Is it possible to delete threads? Obviously this is a huge failure.

[Onacara]

Well I was able to read the frames when I got home and ...um...well...I was able to read them. Ok they are not very good but you shouldn't give up...perhaps you just need to get used to it. Maybe ask for someone to look them over before you post them.

[Heroscape Elffy]

Or more than just one person. I'm not that great of an Editor, mind you.

[gamjuven]

Red more comics I'd say. Get a feel for how comics are written, and how they're shot. Obviously "action" is difficult to photograph using miniatures so you'll have to rely on good dialog.

Manage your space available and make every panel perfect. Try to cut out nonsense dialog and put only what you need on as few panels as possible. Try for a variety of shots as well. I know this is difficult with Heroscape figures and such, but it can really help.

Mainly I'd work on the script of the comic and do some research into how comics are written. Hope that helps!

[Anthasu1]

Yeah, if you follow Gamjuvens advice, you could probably have a great comic. If you need help with this, I coud probably help with text.

[Claws of Death]

I think you did a good job. It's better than anything I can make.