Anthasu1's Customs- Added Rianor First Post!

[Anthasu1]

Click for full size... I used Greyowls templates, Heroscape is a license of Hasbro (Or WoTC now, right?) All rights reserved. Anthasu is the coolest Person on this Planet.
Now, Moving on to the good part.

UTGAR
Rutgar Esenwein- A little more Anti-Squad love for the Vampires. Sonya's brother, he is a powerful foe on the battlefield, drawing the souls out of his enemies and using them to feed his hunger.

Mikhael Esenwein- Nephew of Cyprien Esenwein (Rutgar's son) and Viscount of Bleakewood, Mikhael is sworn into service to Cyprien. Gifted with his skill with the sword and wielding the Esenwein's Black Sword of Terror, he is a horror on the Battlefield.

Vampiric Hounds- The Hunting Dogs of the Esenweins. This is my attempt to make a Common Hero that you would actually use. Might lower the Attack/Defense Later, as it seems a little good for 80 Points, epecially with how much it would activate in an all-Vamp army.

Kiroset- A booster for the Wolves. Entered in the B.I.V.'s Yours 4 Mine contest. Kiroset grows stronger the more Wolves are with him in combat, and he has no problem getting them to him with his Hunter's Howl ability.

Xaric Spiderblade- First Unit in a Wave of Drow. I guess a 70 Point Throwaway hero that will make weak squads Cringe. Decent 4 Attack, with a murderous Special, but fragile.

Drider- Two updates in One Day? This is Madness! THIS. IS. SPARTA!
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Anyways, an Uncommon Hero. Because I couldn't resist. She/He/It has a watered down version of Sujoah's Anti-Hero Sting. Also pretty mobile on Elevations.

Arachna Spindleweb- A support character who can tie up figures with her Web of Lorth attack. I guess meant as some sort of "Leader" for my Custom Drow and whatever Drow WotC comes up with.


VYDAR
Rianor- A Vampire Hunter. Or Undead Hunter. The miniature reminded me of Van Helsing, so I pretty much thought "Why Not?".


AQUILLA
Stone Elementals- An old favorite, I made them Aquilla to help fill out her ranks- Elemental Lord and more to come though- I like the tie in with Nature.

STAR WARS
All my Star wars customs in one small place!

SITH
Darth Caedus is one of my favorite Expanded Universe characters, he is Han and Leia's son turned to the Dark Side. I tried to capture his supportive Commander-ish powers.

Darth Nihilus is a powerful Force user who tends to use two techniques- Force Lightning and Force Death Field.

Sith Marauder- A Common Hero for the Sith. In KOTOR II, these guys made up the Elite of the Sith Force, and if you didn't pay attention, you went down pretty quick.

Sith Assassin- Yup, the annoying guys who pop out of nowhere in KOTOR II. Gave him Stealth and a Bonus when Stealthing to represent surprising the heck out of everyone.


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Change Log:

• Added Xaric Spiderblade and Drider
• Added Rutgar Esenwein, Kiroset, and Mikhael Esenwein
• Added Elementals
• Added Star Wars Customs
• Updated Mikhael and Rutgar Esenwein
• Added Vampiric Hounds, updated Mikhael
• Added Rianor

[Utgar_strategist]

Sounds perfect then again what do I know?

[Anthasu1]

I value everyone's opinions. Thanks for the feedback!

[Utgar_strategist]

Your av reminds me of Fire Emblem Great game one thing I hate is the death lose em thing I get my units killed alot, in those kinda games thats just evil!

[Anthasu1]

Any other opinions? Really want feedback.
EDIT: Come on people, I feel ignored. Feedback please?

[Fuzzie Fuzz]

I'll give you feedback if you give me feedback...

I've found that it's pretty hard to get feedback here, but eventually if you make enough customs, people will start paying attention. It also helps if you make a card for the figure, as most people don't want to read text-only customs.

Now, on to the feedback:

Firstly, range? I'm assuming 1, but that could really effect the points.

Gust of Wind-
When Raizel begins his movement, you may move all figures adjacent to Raizel up to two spaces away from Raizel. This figure ignores all terrain with less than his height. If the figure cannot move two spaces, it receives one automatic wound. Flying figures are not affected by Gust of Wind.

I like this power idea, very creative. However: How tall is the figure? This will really determine the power of this ability. I'd reword it like this:

Gust of Wind-
When Raizel begins his movement, you may move all figures adjacent to Raizel up to two spaces away from Raizel. These figures ignores all terrain less than x high. If a figure can not move two spaces, it receives one automatic wound. Flying figures are not affected by Gust of Wind.

You start out by saying, "...you may... up to two...," but end with a penalty. Instead, just remove the optional phrasing, and keep the penalty.

Also, is it friendly and enemy figures? The way it's worded now, it is, but that might not have been the intention.

All in all, he seems pretty cool. I'd add range, and, if he only has 1 range, lower his point value to... 90? 100 seems a little steep for him now.

[Zhoom45]

I know how you feel about not getting feedback, and I sympathize for you, but Fuzzie Fuzz really said about all there is to say. Hope to see more customs soon

[Anthasu1]

Thank you for the comments. Didn't realize I forgot range.
Thanks, hope you don't mind if you I steal your wording. Probably will do more than Theoryscaping for points, once I actually order the figure.
I'm guesstimating medium 4-5 for height by the way.
EDIT: Both friendly and enemies are affected.

[Fuzzie Fuzz]

Ah. See, I was imagining this being a dragon-sized figure, so the Gust of Wind power would be really helpful for moving figures up walls, etc. I think 90 points would be good, and you don't need the, "away from Raizel" clause. Just saying, "two spaces." would be fine.

Looks good! Out of curiosity, what general does he follow?

EDIT: Also, you say, "...move all figures adjacent to Raizel..." and then, "This figure..."

You should say "These figures..." since you'll probably be moving more than one figure.

[Anthasu1]

I'm making my own faction. It's in my fanfic. The general's name is Seraph, and the cards going to have a stone/cathedral theme. once I get the card done.
EDIT: Stone Elementals up. Same general.

[Zhoom45]

I like the idea for the Stone elementals. The figure looks sweet. I would maybe change their personality to resolute, just because it means about the same, and the figures that have their own personality name just annoy me a lot. I mean, is it absolutley necsisary to have menacing, or tormenting? Really. Is it that hard to just use something that might have use in a power, and not completely cut them off from synergy.You don't need to do this, but I would.



Sorry to explode like that...

[Anthasu1]

Updated. And added support for the Elementals. Think Kato/Hive. Except more Fragile.
EDIT: I will make cards this weekend. My parents have this thing about me doing that during school days.