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The Wind in the Trees

bumper15

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This is my first attempt at soloing a fan fic. I hope you all enjoy it. Tell me what you think, and please criticize. For those that have read and/or participated in Prison Faction over the summer, this is a story of my character before his arrest.

P.S. Oh and Elven Lord I sort of borrowed your character for the first few chapters, he just made a perfect spot for the beginning. If you ever have a problem with the way I make him out, please feel free to PM me.

And now with out further ado............I bring you.................

The Wind in the Trees


Prologue Pt. I

The breeze finally drifted through the command tent, but instead of cooling them down, it only teasingly reminded them how stifling it was in there. The other one was late, though to the ones in the tent, that was no surprise. The enemy was a cold-blooded killer of their kind, and no one had expected him to show up anyway. The leader laughed to himself at the thought, because in fact, they themselves were the cold-blooded ones. The Naga only wanted peace, but the enemy was relentless.
Naga were reptilian-like beings that could transform into different kinds of snakes. They were split up into several different tribes across the lands, but this tribe was the biggest and the best. However, they were also the closest tribe to the Woods of Balon, the only thing that had kept the enemy away was the fact that their eyes were set on the south. The tribes were not tightly woven, honestly, they each had complete apathy for the others. While they didn’t war amongst themselves, they did not live in complete harmony.
To prevent the bloodshed from spreading to his people, Slink had proposed a peace treaty be written between his tribe and the forest dwellers. Slink had bigger problems to worry about, the Necromancer had once again risen to power. Stories had been passed down through his tribes history of the last time he brought his legions of undead among the living. It had almost ended the world, and word said that this time the Necromancer was much stronger. Slink needed to prepare.
“Where issss that wretched Sssprite?” Slink hissed angrily to himself. Truth be told, in a thousand years, no one living had ever seen a Wood Sprite, including the Naga. Those who did never lived long enough to tell the tale. Slink was determined to survive, he had a tribe to rule. “If that thing wantsss to try ssssomething, he’sss in for a sssurprisse,” he smiled to himself and prepared himself for a long wait.


Up above the tent, nestled on a tree limb, rested a fifteen-year-old boy. At least he looked fifteen, Wood Sprites never aged past the year they sprouted. He was in fact close to one hundred years, but who was counting. He knew that they were expecting him in the tent, but he thought he would wait a bit. He enjoyed being able to get inside everyone’s head and use their emotions to his advantage, the more annoyed the Snake became, the more mistakes he would make. He closed his eyes as if in a dream, and went back to how it all started.
Two young Snakes, a mocking term that the Wood Sprites used in regards to the Naga, wandered into their woods, and despite all attempts to scare them off, they found their way to Mother Tree. Mother Tree was what kept all the Wood Sprites alive, she nourished all of them through her roots. They were very protective of her, the only time they killed was if someone was damaging them, their forest, or Mother Tree.
After the two were killed the Wood Sprites sent their heads back to the tribe to dissuade them from entering the Woods of Balon. That was never part of the plan, they were supposed to drop them off closer to the edge, but still deep in the forest. They were supposed to make it look like an accident, there were plenty of pitfalls in the woods. The Snakes had responded as expected by burning parts of the forest. The boy, Orin, grimaced to himself, that was not his intention, he hadn't even been there to make the decision, he had been off hunting with his partner Streak at the time. His captain had been in charge. Lindon, a strong-headed boy who never thought things completely through, was immediately stripped of his rank and had been severely punished for the atrocity. To make matters worse, Orin had arrived back from his hunt with a war on his hands. Orin hated war, but the Wood Sprites were the best fighters in the region. They were the wind in the trees, as many stories said. They could slip, through their forest with ease and quiet, only being seen or heard when they wanted to be. The trick came in handy for fighting a war in and around their forest. In the months following the incident, only one of the two hundred sprites had been killed, and that had been the cause of it all.
He sighed to himself, thinking about the boy, and sat up, his brown, wavy hair shifting with the movement. Orin never liked war, but on the other hand, he was trying to prepare for a bigger war. His patrols in the northern part of the forest had reported signs of the forward troops of the Necromancer’s army coming through from the Wastelands, that had been a week ago.
Orin looked down to see Streak staring up at him, his tongue hanging out the side of his mouth. Streak was Orin’s closest comrade. Each Sprite had an animal comrade. There was a connection between them, and while Orin couldn’t talk to Streak, they understood each other. Orin figured he had kept the Snakes waiting long enough. He leapt off the branch, sticking the landing. He stretched his sore muscles, he had been up there for two hours listening, waiting for the tension to build up in the tent before he arrived. He took a breath to calm himself. He didn’t enjoy bloodshed, but he was prepared for the worst.
 
Thank you for commenting. For your comment. it is not that the naga are evil, I borrowed the character from Elven Lord in Prison Faction. This story is supposed to explain the events that led to Orin arriving in Utgar's prison.

As for typing some more, I am honestly trying, but due to my busy school schedule I am not getting anywhere. I'll probably will have something up this weekend.

Thanks again for your post!!!
 
Sorry I didn't post when I said I would, but Homecoming was last week and I had completely forgotten. Anyway here is the next part.

Prologue Pt.II

Slink glanced up from his thoughts when he heard the canvas flaps on the tent being parted. From outside a boy walked in no older than sixteen. His dress was of an unknown style and was different shades of green and brown. Slink watched as the boy strolled in, an air of command about him, as if it was his command tent he was walking into. This was no doubt the leader of the Wood Sprites, but he was only a boy!
“Greetingsss. I am honored that you have finally decided to join usss,” Slink began with mock courtesy.
“I am pleased as well to finally get this meeting underway,” Orin replied casually, ignoring the sarcasm. “I believe we are here to discuss the terms of your surrender, am I correct?”
Already Slink disliked the boy's attitude, but he needed to keep in control. “The people of my tribe have more important matterssss to attend to,” he hissed, “And I would like to ssssave both our people unnecesssary bloodshed.”
“If I am not mistaken, your kind has been the only one to bleed in this fight Snake," Slink hissed angrily at the statement, "but I concede your point. We also have someplace else where we must focus our attention,” Orin stated, keeping his face as blank as possible while studying his opponent. He could already tell that Slink was no fool. Orin sighed and prepared himself for the negotiations.


He watched as soldiers moved silently through the woods. He took a deep breath, taking in everything he hadn’t seen for close to five-hundered years.“It has been too long,” he sighed, “It is good to be back!”
He turned behind him as his seemingly endless hordes crawled through the trees of the only true opposition to his power. The Woods of Balon were the source of all life in Alarya and were going to be his launching point.
One of his captains approached from the front of the lines, “There is nothing here sir, we can’t seem to find it.”
“Keep searching!” he roared, “They won’t be able to put up a fight if their beloved tree is destroyed!” The captain saluted and hastened away. The Wood Sprites ruined his chances of conquering the world many years ago, but they would not stop him this time. He will have his kingdom.
He turned and bellowed orders to the thousands of soldiers he had under his command, he had a tree to find.


“I cannot have you Snakes running through my forest!” Orin stated softly but powerfully.
“The Naga do asss they pleasssse!” Slink hissed just as powerfully with an slight edge added to his voice, “You have no right over what we may or may not do! My tribe has done no harm to your people.”
A wolf howled in the distance, a long mournful sound, the negotiations had been going on for six hours and night was falling.
“This misunderstanding was caused because your people entered land that has been off limits to any nation for the past thousand years. It is not just about your tribe, but your race. We always try to avoid bloodshed, and I know that you have a more level head than the rest of the Snakes, but I can't risk more harm being done. I agree that what happened to the two Snakes was regrettable and, believe me, the one who caused it has been punished for it, but in your best interests, take my advice and never enter my woods again.”
Slink rested his hands on the table, the long meeting starting to wear at him. Suddenly he jumped back with a start as an arrow embedded itself on the table between the fingers of his left hand. “What is the meaning of this attempt on my life?" Slink hissed, “You will soon regr...” the words died on his throat when he saw the look on the Sprite’s face, Orin wasn't preparing himself to defend his life from the Naga, his eyes were focused only on the arrow in fear. He realized that the arrow wasn't meant for him, it had been meant for the boy.
Orin could not believe what his eyes saw right in front of him. He ignored the Naga’s shouting, so absorbed by the arrow. He remembered the wolf's howl. He realized now that it had been Streak trying to warn him for something.
He had ignored the first warning, but the second couldn't be avoided. The message was right in front of him. The arrow still sat embedded at the table in front of Slink, but the worst part was that the arrrow's feathers were black.
 
Very interesting:D
You write in a different style than me and it intrigues me. sorry I was late in posting I had to go to a funeral that was forever away. keep me posted.:p
And I love your Signature my math teacher recently said that to the class fool and it was hilarious:rofl:
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Prologue Pt. III

Orin walked up and pulled the arrow from the table, "Sorry about the confusion Snake," Orin said, twisting the arrow in his fingers, his eyes never leaving the feathers on the back, "This arrow wasn't for you, it was a message for me. I've got to go." He left the tent without another word.
Orin left the tent arrow still in hand. A black-feathered arrow was given to every Wood Sprite when they sprouted. It was tipped in a magic that had been given by the chieftain before Orin almost one hundred years ago. Magic that would send whatever it was placed on straight to the chieftain. The arrow itself was to be used as a signal, a warning, that the Necromancer had returned.
Orin had heard the reports that the army's advance scouts had entered the northern fringes of the forest, but he never believed that the rest of the army would penetrate deep enough into the forest to warrant one of the Sprites sending a signal to him.
The Necromancer was a ruthless tyrant who had ruled the vast wastelands of the north five hundred years ago. He was the most powerful necromancer the world had ever seen. Most necromancers could summon mindless armies of undead to do their bidding. The Necromancer could summon undead with full knowledge of their past and their past intelligence. They were still bound by service, but these undead were much more capable than the rest.
Necromancy was the reason that Wood Sprites were created by the Moon Goddess, life to counter death. But the Necromancer was the most powerful any Wood Sprite had ever faced.
The chieftain of the time, Marid sealed away the Necromancer when he first came to power, conquering most of Alarya. Marid sealed away the Necromancer at the cost of his own life.
Orin hoped that he was stronger than Marid was, or else Alarya was going to end.
Orin made it at last to Mother Tree, he reached into the bows and pulled out his hunting horn, he blew one long clear note and settled down to wait.
 
Book I: The Terror from the North

Chapter 1

A horn call rang through the forest, it resounded from everywhere and was impossible to trace. The Necromancer's army cowered in fear, not at the sound, but at what the sound represented, life.
"So the Sprites do know we're here," the Necromancer mused silently to himself, "Get back to work you piles of bones!" he bellowed to the army. He turned to his lieutenant, "Fetch me my armor, we're going to have company soon." He turned to a silent zombie next to him, "Are we close?"
"I cannot tell. My memories are wiped of this place," he replied solemnly.
The Necromancer turned around without another word.

Orin waited while the rest of the Wood Sprites gathered in the grove around Mother Tree. When all had arrived he began, "As all of you know, today I went to discuss peace with the Snakes. I am sorry to announce that those negotiations were cut short. I was pulled away from the meeting by this." He pulled out the arrow and presented it to everyone assembled, there were collective gasps from the crowd. Silence followed his next words, "Some of you were present when last the Necromancer came to power. You have seen what he is capable of. The rest have heard of the viciousness of the Dead Wars. We knew that the seals holding him would fail eventually, and now is that time.
"We have spent five hundred years preparing this forest for invasion, knowing full well that the Necromancer would restart his campaign here. We have trained hard over time, perfecting arts we have mastered over thousands of years. It is time we put that training to use."
"Who fired this arrow?" Orin asked the crowd.
A girl steps from the crowd, his sister, Arian. He could see that her quiver was indeed missing a black feathered arrow.
"Where did you see the undead army sister? To the north where their kingdom lies and where we have seen the patrols?"
"No," she said, tears coming to her eyes. "The Necromancer has sent his main army to the south of the forest, the are marching deeper and deeper into our woods. The patrols were a decoy."
Orin paled and had to grip one of the lower branches of Mother Tree to keep from collapsing. The south was almost completely barren of traps. With all the kingdoms between the wastelands and the southern end of the Woods of Balon, no chieftains had seen fit to protect the south side. Orin was the first to have placed any traps in the south, but it was still next to nothing.
There was only one way that the Necromancer could've known that the south was empty. He had summoned the only Wood Sprite killed in the war against the Snakes, a casualty that the Snakes didn't even know they caused. Poor Benji, killed by the two Snakes when they entered the grove, now a slave to the Necromancer.
Benji had been the most recent Wood Sprite to have been sprouted, originally from Mero like Orin and his sister. He had also been the youngest Sprite ever to have sprouted, at the age of twelve. To think that he was now forced to serve the Necromancer was unbearable.
In his grief Orin knew that the rest of the crowd knew this sad fact as well. Everyone mourned the fate of Benji.
"Mother Tree has given us life and sustains that life, in return we protect Mother Tree. The Necromancer is trying to find her, to end all the life she gives, we have to protect her at all costs."
Many of the Wood Sprites were heartened at this. "Take your fill of her now, we leave in the hour and I don't know when we'll return."
Orin turned to enter the cavern under Mother Tree, to be nourished by her roots, his sister followed, followed by the rest.
 
You write one thing, and suddenly calling people "The Necromancer" is the next big thing.:D

Yays! Bumper15 is writing his own fan-fic!
:excited:

Really great so far to listen to the story of our friend Orin. Keep it up!
 
I am honored that you would think that only me calling something "The Necromancer" makes it a big thing. :p

Thanks for the comment
 
Chapter 2

Orin arose at dusk. The dead calm of the forest around him was frightening. How could it be so calm when the world around it was slowly collapsing. He sent a message through Mother Tree to wake the others, and then he left the cavern.
He ran through all the traps in the southern parts of the forest. Most were placed near and around Mother Tree to help prevent the Wood Sprites from being surrounded when the battle came. He knew he couldn't fight this army head on, he also knew that the guerilla tactics usually employed by Wood Sprites were expected by the Necromancer.
His thoughts kept going back to Benji. He had to free him from the Necromancer, the only way to do that was to kill him. The Necromancer could only summon a spirit or person once. Even though these undead could be killed just as easily as you could kill a human, they were faster and stronger, imbued with magic from their summoning.
The rest of the Sprites came out of the cavern and gathered around Orin. Orin looked at them all and signaled for everyone to gather their weapons. Orin himself grabbed his bow, four knives and the rapier that was a gift from his father.
The met up again and Orin set out his plan for them.

Orin sat in the tree and waited. Arian was to his left and Golgor, Orin's new captain, was on his right. They were positioned about ten miles from Mother Tree to their left. The hordes were heading this way and Orin did not want them to change direction towards her.
Orin hated war, not only because of the killing, but because of his inability to lead others. He was born the youngest of a royal family, Arian only a year older. He had never had to lead as a result of his parents ignoring him to teach his eldest brother, and heir to the throne. Orin's only assets were his confidence, which was always visible on his face, and his intelligence. Luckily for him, the Wood Sprites had no need of a leader, the only time the chief had power was during times of war. Orin had so far been successful in leading them through war, but he was afraid it was about to end.
He watched as the hordes advanced their way through the forests, making no attempt to remain silent. They knew they had lost surprise when Orin blew the horn, so they were abandoning stealth for speed.
That was a mistake, they didn't yet know that the Sprites were watching them. Once the Sprites opened fire, they would pick up the pace and move even faster. The woods were not very accommodating to the impatient as the hordes would soon find out.
Orin nocked an arrow and drew back his bow. He tried to find his target. He scanned around until he found it. He released the arrow and watched as it flew between the eyes of his target. He watched saddened as Benji collapsed on the ground. It was the last gift he could give to Benji.
There were roars of surprise and rage from the undead below and they began their charge. Orin drew another arrow and waited while the rest prepared themselves. He released the arrow, and watched it soar towards the enemy, quickly followed by two hundred others. The Necromancer's war had begun again.
 
Yays!
This is really mounting up for a fight; I can't wait for the next part, your writing is really good.

Are the Naga gone now, or are they coming back?
 
It's a bit short but here's the next chapter.
Chapter 3

The hordes of undead were paying dearly for every foot they gained. The fight had lasted most of the day and the hordes were gradually gaining ground on the Wood Sprites. The undead had archers of their own and were using them to good advantage. There were no casualties yet, but the Wood Sprites had to take time from firing on the enemy, to dodge the arrows that were lucky enough to have been aimed true.
"Signal the lines to slow their fire," Orin ordered, "We need to save arrows for later."
The signal was passed and the constant raining of arrows slowed slightly. The undead captains noticed this and took advantage. Shouts were raised and the undead pressed forward with more vigor.
Their shouts of rage changed to those of surprise as the ground the undead had just been trying to gain suddenly collapsed under their feet.
Orin wathed as hundreds of undead were pushed into the pit as the back lines continued to press forward, unaware of the new obstacle. It was the largest trap they had managed to build in the southern section of the woods. Orin's spiked pit expanded beyond the lines of the Necromancer's army, but the edges would be revealed once the army would decide to go around the pit.
"Signal the lines to withdraw to the next point," Orin stated picking himself up and stretching after almost ten hours crouching in a tree. "They won't continue the fight until tomorrow. The Necromancer knows that fighting at night is our specialty." Orin withdrew, the hordes still in a state of uproar.
 
Interesting. They don't like night... What will Orin do? I like your description of the systematic approach of the undead. I'm wondering what's going to happen next, considering how grim it looks for the Wood-Sprites.
 
Chapter 4 pt. 1

The Necromancer glanced around the encampment from his tent. It was unusually peaceful around this part of the camp, since his army was busy on his project. It had been four days since his army first met the Wood Sprites and his horde hadn't met any resistance since. He had sent repeated scouting parties out to scout for traps, remarkably, not only were the parties able to find several traps scattered across the forest, none of the scale of the first one, but the parties were also unchallenged by the Wood Sprites.
He was impatient to continue his campaign against the Sprites. He needed to wipe them out as quickly as possible to continue his campaign against the world. He dreamed of the day he would eventually exert his power over the Wood Sprites and have them kneel at his feet. However preparations needed to be made in order to triumph over the unconquerable.
His quiet was interrupted by the galloping of horses. His commander came into view across the campsite. The Nightmare had been the commander of the Wastelands when the Necromancer returned and he had offered his loyalty to the Necromancer in exchange for a sizable amount of land in Alarya. He was the only warrior in the Necromancer's army that came of his own volition in the hopes of spreading his power. The Necromancer was always wary around him.
The Nightmare pulled up in front of him and dismounted. "My liege," he hissed going down on his knee.
"Rise commander," the Necromancer replied, "What news of the project?"
"The project goes as according to plan, but that is not why I have come to you. A scout has returned and has need to show you something."
The Necromancer got up and grabbed his skeletal horse. He followed the Nightmare and eventually arrived at a clearing where one of his scouts sat waiting with a bundle at his feet.
"What is it you have to show me slave?" the Necromancer asked.
The scout, what used to be an elf, opened the top of the sack and pulled out an unconcious body.
"Is that....?"
"Yes my lord, it is one of them."
The body awoke with a kick to his side, he stared at the Necromancer with horror. The Necromancer smiled and ran his sword through the Sprite's body. He opened himself to draw his magic and seal the spirit back into its body. He released the magic and forced his influence on the spirit. He went to finish the binding when the spirit ripped free of his hold.
The Necromancer roared, it had never once been denied a spirit. He didn't know how it was possible but something had taken the spirit from him. He glanced down and watched the body disintegrate into gold dust.
He glanced angrily at the scout, intent on venting his fury, but was held back by a hand on his chest. He looked at the Nightmare, "My liege, all is not lost. There was another reason to bring this scout to you." He turned towards the scout, "Tell him where you found the Sprite," he ordered.
The scout merely shook and cowered on the forest floor too frightened of being under the attention of the Necromancer to answer.
The Nightmare quickly ended the cowering with his sword. "My liege," he said, pausing to wipe the blood off of his wickedly curved sword, "Allow me to tell you. Our search at last is over."
The Necromancer stared at the Nightmare, comprehension abruptly dawning on him and a wicked smile broke across his face. His plan was coming together perfectly.
 
Creepy. :runaway:. Glad to see you're keeping yours updated. Unlike mine...

So, any particular reason why Sprites can't be taken by the Necromancer?
 
Creepy. :runaway:. Glad to see you're keeping yours updated. Unlike mine...

So, any particular reason why Sprites can't be taken by the Necromancer?

They can be, don't forget poor Benji. "Something had taken the spirit from him." something else interfered with the Necromancer's plans.

I might have the next part up tomorrow, I had originally planned for a combined section but the first part turned out longer than expected and I panicked. I'll probably just add it on to the last chapter anyways.

P.S. It's great to see you back among the living sir william :)
 
Here's part 2, the ending may be a bit confusing but will be explained in later chapters.

Chapter 4 pt. 2

The Necromancer hadn't made a move in four days and Orin was starting to worry. The Necromancer wasn't patient by any stretch of the word and he would only be staying in one place if he thought it would ensure his victory. Orin turned his mind to other matters, like the protection of his forest. The four days had been a massive benefit to the Wood Sprites, allowing them to prepare a major defensive in the area. They had dug several pits and even managed to create a short wall behind them.
The Necromancer's scouts worried Orin, but he couldn't do anything about it. He needed everyone here to prepare the defenses. As a precaution however, he had a rotation set to guard Mother Tree.
Golgor raced torwards Orin from across the clearing. "Golgor my friend, is there a problem with the defenses?" Orin asked judging the look on his face.
"Not the defenses," Golgor replied, white as a ghost, "Lindon is dead. I was on my way to relieve him of guard duty when I saw one of the Necromancer's scouts stumble upon him and bind him up. I followed the scout to a clearing where he met the Necromancer and watched as he killed him. Somehow however, the Necromancer wasn't able to reanimate him."
Orin was partially relieved at the last part, but he was still troubled. "How could anyone, let alone one of the Necromancer's minions, catch a Wood Sprite by surprise?"
"He was asleep at his post," Golgor replied simply.
"Asleep at his..." Lindon repeated flabbergasted, "First the Snakes and now this, I have to say Lindon deserved his fate."
That's not all Orin. The guard duty that I was relieving Lindon of was for Mother Tree."
Orin's legs almost gave from under him, "Gather our brothers and sisters, you must move to protect Mother Tree immediately. I'll be back, we're going to need some help." With that Orin ran off into the woods.

Lindon awoke on a hard cavern floor. He first noticed that he was completely healed. His next thought was that the Necromancer had resummoned him, panic started to take ahold. He glanced up but instead of seeing the Necromancer's frightening face, he saw a winged man dressed in green staring at him. Lindon fell back, then he noticed that there was a boy on his right. Lindon quailed beneath the vicious stare of the boy. It was Orin!
 
Leave a comment if you read this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It tells me I'm not just typing at a brick wall. Even if you hate it, tell me.

What he said

Chapter 5

Golgor and the Wood Sprites at last made it to Mother Tree. Being so close to her was revitalizing to all the Wood Spites after almost a week without her nourishment, only what little they could carry within the vials. The Necromancer wasn't there yet, but the scouts Golgor sent reported that they would arrive in the hour. They immediately set to work preparing the many defenses throughout the clearing where Mother Tree sat in the middle.
Golgor knew that this would be the last fight of the Wood Sprites. The Necromancer had found Mother Tree much faster than he was supposed to, and Golgor vowed that when he saw Lindon again in the afterlife he would punish him dearly.
Aryan approached him from the cavern beneath Mother Tree. "What kind of help can Orin bring to us?" she asked.
"I'm not sure, but we need to send out for help as well. Every animal in these woods draws life from Mother Tree, if we send out a message, they will answer."
Aryan nodded and without another word left. Probably to find Naer. Golgor thought imagining Aryan's proud hawk.
Out in the woods a twig snapped and Golgor was brought back from his thoughts. "Positions everyone!" he yelled,"they're here!" and then to himself he added, "Goddess protect us."

The Necromancer gazed upon the sight before him. His entire life's work had led him to this moment. He stared at the majesty of Mother Tree with contempt, it was the only thing that had stopped him last time, and he very much desired to watch it die. Yet he couldn't help feeling awed by its sheer majesty and presence. So delicate, so fragile, yet the very bane of his existence. The pinkish white leaves swayed gently even though there was no breeze, filled with the life that it symbolized and protected.
He broke from his conflicting emotions and turned towards the Nightmare and gave his orders, "I want you to surround them here, we don't want to allow any of them to escape. We wait till dusk to attack. This clearing won't provide them with any cover, and I want our little light show to stand out to these pathetic Sprites," the last was said with a sinister smile.
The Nightmare bowed and replied, "As you command." He then set off to relay the orders.
The Necromancer turned to the barrels filled with what his soldier had been mixing for several days now. He then looked up and gestured to the nearest soldier. The soldier arrived quickly and bowed meekly before the Necromancer.
"Distribute this among the archers maggot!" the Necromancer ordered.
The soldier nodded hastily and quickly set one of the barrels on his shoulder and hastened to where the archers were being positioned.
Screams echoed across the clearing as undead all around the clearing encountered the innumerable traps surrounding the clearing.

Orin raced through the woods. His sense of direction was perfect and he knew where he was, he just didn't know if the help he needed was still there. He turned the corner around a grove of trees and found the pavilion to be deserted. There wasn't much hope that they'd still be here, but this was where he had to start anyway.
He bent down in front of the entrance and found the tracks he was looking for. They were almost a week old, but they were still just barely visible. He followed the tracks for several miles until he heard a noise directly in front of him through a stand of bushes.
Orin peered through the bushes and saw seven of the Necromancer's undead soldier's across from him. He wondered why they would be here and not at Mother Tree. He had no time for wondering however because he had been careless in sneaking a look at the undead and had been spotted.
Orin drew his rapier and leapt into the midst of them dispatching them all in a matter of seconds. Suddenly an arrow flew from the opposite clearing and struck Orin in his right shoulder. Orin fell to his knees in surprise and pain, and turned to see another soldier nocking an arrow to his bow.
Orin watched as the soldier approached closer and prepared to let fly the arrow when suddenly he stiffened and collapsed on the ground, an arrow piercing his back.
"I never believed that a Ssssprite could not be only be caught off guard, but wounded by ssssuch a mundane weapon," hissed a voice from a tree. Orin watched as the person he had been searching for dropped from a tree and approached him. He struggled to remain conscious.
"Sl...Slink," he managed before he succumbed to the darkness.
 
I'm serious people. Any comments are welcome. Including criticism, I would love to know how I can make my story better, just try remain to civil.

Anyone????
 
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