The_Overmind
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I think that the writing for Bok-Bur-Na's character bio is weak and lore-breaking, so this is my proposed alternative that I personally substitute over the official version. I'd also like to say that I appreciate that Renegade has brought Heroscape back; I think the reason some corners give them so much flak for their mistakes is because the community cares- which is also why I put this up.
Feel free to use this in anyway you want, and I am interested in thoughts and suggestions to improve it. Being credited is nice, but not the reason I posted this. Enjoy:
Bok-Bur-Na:
Character Bio: Marro rarely survive long away from their hives. However, Bok-Bur-Na is an exceptional Marro.
Previously a lowly drudge, Bok-Bur-Na's separation from his hivelord has allowed his innate vigor and ambition to surface. Already Bok-Bur-Na has started learning gene-splicing; he has increased the powers of his mind to strike fear into his enemies with only his presence and he replaced one of his pistols with an acid-blade.
As if his unnaturally enhanced force of presence wasn't enough to demoralize his enemies, Bok-Bur-Na uses this blade to liquify their fallen comrades and absorb the nutrients therein, healing his wounds.
Even Bok-Bur-Na’s fellow pirates are made uneasy by the alien captain, and despite these grisly achievements, Bok-Bur-Na’s hunger for power only continues to grow.
A smile void of joy crosses Utgar’s face as he watches. He chose well. It is only a matter of time before he will witness the formation of a hivelord.
Feel free to use this in anyway you want, and I am interested in thoughts and suggestions to improve it. Being credited is nice, but not the reason I posted this. Enjoy:
Bok-Bur-Na:
Character Bio: Marro rarely survive long away from their hives. However, Bok-Bur-Na is an exceptional Marro.
Previously a lowly drudge, Bok-Bur-Na's separation from his hivelord has allowed his innate vigor and ambition to surface. Already Bok-Bur-Na has started learning gene-splicing; he has increased the powers of his mind to strike fear into his enemies with only his presence and he replaced one of his pistols with an acid-blade.
As if his unnaturally enhanced force of presence wasn't enough to demoralize his enemies, Bok-Bur-Na uses this blade to liquify their fallen comrades and absorb the nutrients therein, healing his wounds.
Even Bok-Bur-Na’s fellow pirates are made uneasy by the alien captain, and despite these grisly achievements, Bok-Bur-Na’s hunger for power only continues to grow.
A smile void of joy crosses Utgar’s face as he watches. He chose well. It is only a matter of time before he will witness the formation of a hivelord.
