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Old February 16th, 2011, 06:40 PM
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The Rise of Hel

Chapter 1: New Secrets

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Chapter 2: The Summoning

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Chapter 3: The Unleashing

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Chapter 4: The Devastation

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Chapter 5: The Attack

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Chapter 6: The Destruction
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Chapter 7: The Flight
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Chapter 8: The Escape
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Chapter 9: The Council~ Part 1

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Chapter 10: The Council~ Part 2

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Old February 16th, 2011, 06:40 PM
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Re: The Rise of Hel

This is the start of my new fan fic. Hope you enjoy, feel free to comment.

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Old February 21st, 2011, 01:12 AM
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Re: The Rise of Hel

Chapter two posted, I hope you enjoy it. I plan to include pictures throughout the story, to give it a bit more realism. The battle pictures actually take place on a heroscape board. Those will hopefully be in the next few chapters.

P.S Just wondering if anyone thinks these chapters are too long. Im used to writing novel stuff, and aren't all that good at shortening stories. But if you guys think its too long for people to stay interessted, I'll cut it back, and make the next chapters more brief. Please let me know what you think.

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Old February 21st, 2011, 09:07 AM
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Re: The Rise of Hel

I enjoy this story very much. No, I honestly don't mind if your sections are long, it adds more to the reading.
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Old February 21st, 2011, 11:53 AM
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Re: The Rise of Hel

Lol. Utgar's an idiot. That dragon could probably eat him in one bite. :P

Nice story, BTW.

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Old February 22nd, 2011, 01:00 AM
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Re: The Rise of Hel

Chapter 3 posted. Thanks for the compliments guys. I took note of your observation, Claws of Death, and tried to explain it in this next chapter. Hope you all enjoy.

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Old February 24th, 2011, 10:31 PM
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Re: The Rise of Hel

Oh boy. You just won my best Heroscape fiction that I have read award. GREAT JOB!!!!!! (The chapters are by no means too long, at least not for me.)

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Old February 26th, 2011, 01:29 AM
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Re: The Rise of Hel

Fourth chapter is up.

Thanks a lot for the compliments guys, especially The Grim Reaper's Friend. They mean a lot.

I re-organized the thread, as to hide the chapters in different sections. (so as not to dissuade people from reading it, when they open it and are overwhealmed by how long it is ) This makes it neater, as well as easier to get to the comments at the bottom.

One question though, to those people who are more computer-savy then me. (Although thats not much of an acomplishment, Im pretty noob-like when it comes to formatting. Why does the second and third chapter expand out to fill the page? My guess is because of the picture, but is there a way to fix it? I could use the help.

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Old February 26th, 2011, 02:42 AM
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Re: The Rise of Hel

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Fourth chapter is up.

Thanks a lot for the compliments guys, especially The Grim Reaper's Friend. They mean a lot.

I re-organized the thread, as to hide the chapters in different sections. (so as not to dissuade people from reading it, when they open it and are overwhealmed by how long it is ) This makes it neater, as well as easier to get to the comments at the bottom.

One question though, to those people who are more computer-savy then me. (Although thats not much of an acomplishment, Im pretty noob-like when it comes to formatting. Why does the second and third chapter expand out to fill the page? My guess is because of the picture, but is there a way to fix it? I could use the help.

Thanks again for the compliments and comments! Hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Umm, I'm not sure what you mean. It doesn't expand over here. It looks just like the others. If it does on yours, it probably is the picture, and you could try resizing it. (Just use the arrows when you hover your mouse over the edge of the picture. It should work.)

P.S. Glad you like the posts. I'll be sure to post again.

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Old February 26th, 2011, 10:55 PM
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Re: The Rise of Hel

Thanks for the tip, I'm glad it doesn't seem to be messed up. That's good to here.

The next chapter should be up soon. I estimate there will be a total of 8 or 9 chapters in all. I post again when the next one is up.

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Re: The Rise of Hel

Chapter 5 is up and ready. The longest chapter yet
As always, comments and suggestions are very much welcome.

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Ah... Drake! Great read!
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