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Old October 13th, 2019, 06:28 PM
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Re: The Book of Demona - Final Editing.

If this is ready for a card, I can probably knock it out tomorrow night. Maaaaybe tonight depending on how late the top 8 of our tournament goes.
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Re: The Book of Demona - Final Editing.

Nice to see a bio up here.
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Old October 14th, 2019, 10:18 AM
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Re: The Book of Demona - Final Editing.

Sneaky edit, Karat!

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Re: The Book of Demona - Final Editing.

Bio shouldn't be a book.
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Holy shoot, yeah, just a paragraph, maybe two. Enough to get the theme. If whatever we have sounds interesting, it'd prompt people to read the comic.
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Bio shouldn't be a book.
Holy shoot, yeah, just a paragraph, maybe two. Enough to get the theme. If whatever we have sounds interesting, it'd prompt people to read the comic.
Trust me, I cut what I could. The magic bit was requested by Karat to explain the Blind Warrior bit. The Macbeth bit is required otherwise her resurrection makes no sense, and it's a massive part of her past (though I was half-tempted not to put it, since it's a bit of a spoiler - as I said, though, it's needed for the card to make sense). The Castle Wyvern bit is basically her origin, and the most important part. The 1994 explains her status quo.
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Re: The Book of Demona - Final Editing.

It doesn't have to be complex. The first paragraph seems fine by itself. add something in about her resurrection and we're good. That's so long I don't even want to read it to find things to cut.
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Re: The Book of Demona - Final Editing.

I don't think we have a standard of telling someone's entire origin story in our bios. If we did, a lot more of them would be the length of what you have here. We just need enough to know what she's about as a character. A lot of that is right there in your first paragraph, I agree. I'd trim the unnecessary stuff from that paragraph, thread in some stuff about her MacBeth relationship, and cut the rest, personally.

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Re: The Book of Demona - Final Editing.

I'm not picking on you,just so you know, LO. I do the same thing, and much of the time am told to cut down bios, too. I like people knowing the Indy characters I run. It's just not necessary and really clutters things up.
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Re: The Book of Demona - Final Editing.

In that case, I honestly don't know what to do here. I don't see anything that isn't needed.


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Re: The Book of Demona - Final Editing.

I would just go with this.
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She's bloody complex.
Then you could link a more complex bio like you have.

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