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Re: Kristoff Von Doom - Final Editing
That looks like a good fix!
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#38
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Re: Kristoff Von Doom - Final Editing
Archie's wording looks good
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Re: Kristoff Von Doom - Final Editing
On the first power, I think I might exchange that last comma for an "and". Slightly longer but we aren't really hurting for space here and it's slightly less choppy when reading it.
As for my second edit below, putting the Name addition first just flows a little better I think. I don't love having 2 "and's" in that sentence but it reads better that way to me. Edit. Quote:
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Last edited by Karat; September 12th, 2023 at 01:35 PM. |
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Re: Kristoff Von Doom - Final Editing
Make sure to keep the italics on Doctor Doom there.
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Re: Kristoff Von Doom - Final Editing
Heh, I always forget to add that back. It the downside to copy pasta before editing.
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Re: Kristoff Von Doom - Final Editing
50% chance I forgot to add it back on the card the first time
Would I want it to be everything I love...sure...but that's just not realistic so I'm going to focus on finding things that will make me unhappy and work on fixing those. |
#43
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Re: Kristoff Von Doom - Final Editing
Thanks Karat!
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#44
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Re: Kristoff Von Doom - Final Editing
So are we ready for Art here? If the wording seems set, just change the title of the thread to indicate as much.
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Re: Kristoff Von Doom - Final Editing
I thought I needed 48hrs from the last wording change to propose a vote for art, but looks like I just say:
Moving to art. |
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Re: Kristoff Von Doom - Art
Yeah, editing and art aren't structurally separate in the voting/phase structure. They're broken out a bit forum-wise in order to just make it easier to see what thread needs what kind of attention.
I could hit art here if japes doesn't snag it. |
#47
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Re: Kristoff Von Doom - Art
Thanks! He's really your baby, I'd love to see what you came up with.
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#48
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Go for it. I hadn't started this one yet
Would I want it to be everything I love...sure...but that's just not realistic so I'm going to focus on finding things that will make me unhappy and work on fixing those. |
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