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Old September 9th, 2023, 08:56 PM
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Re: Kristoff Von Doom - Final Editing

That looks like a good fix!
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Old September 10th, 2023, 09:28 AM
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Re: Kristoff Von Doom - Final Editing

Archie's wording looks good

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Old September 12th, 2023, 11:34 AM
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Re: Kristoff Von Doom - Final Editing

On the first power, I think I might exchange that last comma for an "and". Slightly longer but we aren't really hurting for space here and it's slightly less choppy when reading it.

As for my second edit below, putting the Name addition first just flows a little better I think. I don't love having 2 "and's" in that sentence but it reads better that way to me.

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DOOM'S HEIR
When a Doctor Doom you controlally is defeated, you may move any unrevealed Order Markers from that card to this card. If there is an inactive Doctor Doom on your team, Kristoff gains the Name Doctor Doom and has +1 Attack, Flying, and Super Strength, and gains the Name Doctor Doom.
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When a Doctor Doom ally is defeated, you may move any unrevealed Order Markers from that card to this card. If there is an inactive Doctor Doom on your team, Kristoff gains the Name Doctor Doom, and has +1 Attack, Flying, and Super Strength.

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Old September 12th, 2023, 11:53 AM
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Re: Kristoff Von Doom - Final Editing

Make sure to keep the italics on Doctor Doom there.

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Re: Kristoff Von Doom - Final Editing

Heh, I always forget to add that back. It the downside to copy pasta before editing.
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Re: Kristoff Von Doom - Final Editing

50% chance I forgot to add it back on the card the first time

Would I want it to be everything I love...sure...but that's just not realistic so I'm going to focus on finding things that will make me unhappy and work on fixing those.
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Re: Kristoff Von Doom - Final Editing

Thanks Karat!
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Re: Kristoff Von Doom - Final Editing

So are we ready for Art here? If the wording seems set, just change the title of the thread to indicate as much.

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Re: Kristoff Von Doom - Final Editing

I thought I needed 48hrs from the last wording change to propose a vote for art, but looks like I just say:

Moving to art.
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Re: Kristoff Von Doom - Art

Yeah, editing and art aren't structurally separate in the voting/phase structure. They're broken out a bit forum-wise in order to just make it easier to see what thread needs what kind of attention.

I could hit art here if japes doesn't snag it.
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Re: Kristoff Von Doom - Art

Thanks! He's really your baby, I'd love to see what you came up with.
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Re: Kristoff Von Doom - Art

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Yeah, editing and art aren't structurally separate in the voting/phase structure. They're broken out a bit forum-wise in order to just make it easier to see what thread needs what kind of attention.

I could hit art here if japes doesn't snag it.
Go for it. I hadn't started this one yet

Would I want it to be everything I love...sure...but that's just not realistic so I'm going to focus on finding things that will make me unhappy and work on fixing those.
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