Bloodraven's Customs

[whitestuff]

The Crow

• Dual Pistols - Can you attack the same figure twice? I'd have a look at some of the official cards with a double attack and try and copy their wording. Official is always better.
• You need a full stop on the end of Dual Pistols
• Typo in Crow Vision - receives
• Crow Vision - so you can remove a marker from anyone's card, not just the person you attack?
• I don't remember the Crow having Super-Strength...
• Finally, I think that with a resurrection type of ability, 260 might be a bit cheap. Maybe 280-290?

[bloodraven]

I will change the wording for the dual pistols. I want it to be like Iron Man's, where he can attack an additional time. What do you mean full stop?

I will also fix the typo, and would it be ok to have it removed from anyones card? I am still pretty new to this.

And I will also change the points to 290, which is where I first thought of being, but didn't know if it would be too high. Thanks for the comments!!!

[whitestuff]

Originally Posted by bloodraven

I will change the wording for the dual pistols. I want it to be like Iron Man's, where he can attack an additional time. What do you mean full stop?

Sorry, it's an Aussie word. I meant a period at the end of the sentence.

Originally Posted by bloodraven

I will also fix the typo, and would it be ok to have it removed from anyones card? I am still pretty new to this.

If it fits thematically it is. I'm not sure how the Crow vision works in the comic books.

Originally Posted by bloodraven

And I will also change the points to 290, which is where I first thought of being, but didn't know if it would be too high. Thanks for the comments!!!

No worries. Just make sure you do the same for other's customs. You gotta share the love...

[bloodraven]

Originally Posted by whitestuff

If it fits thematically it is. I'm not sure how the Crow vision works in the comic books.

In the comics and the movie he basically was able to see where the bad guys where using the crow. It led him where he needed to be.

[bloodraven]

Here is the updated card:


Thanks for the help and suggestions! Any other comments, please voice them!

[Jorundr Shieldcrusher]

Looks pretty good.